Ponyville is a tourist hot spot! People from all over Equestria are flocking to Ponyville, and some of the towns residents seem to be reacting strangely. Could this have something to do with a new shady business opening on the outskirts of town?
Great job. I liked how you made this chapter. I loved that you included Starlight. I wonder what they want from Mac. It's also good to see that the stallions are being affected (I know that the majority of ponies are female, but it was good to see that the native Stallions are being corrupted in some way as well. At least become blind to what is going on.) I think you are doing a great job. I do wonder one thing though. How has all of this escaped Twilight and Spike. I wonder what is going to happen to them. Best of luck. Great job.
Yeah I also wonder about Twilight. Is she ensnared or is she oblivious? It seems too widespread to be ignorable but she can be oblivious at times, plus intimidating to target. Starlight being there implies they have no problem controlling dangerous magicians though.
Cheerilee, it seemed, was carrying a tray in either hand, each one littered with an assortment of drinks, held remarkably stable as she navigated her dimmed surroundings. A ruby-red corset cinched her generous figure, forcing her breasts into prominence, accompanied by pairs of similarly vibrant bottoms and heels and a set of bunny ears, all tied together by a beaming smile that never seemed to waver.
Why don't more stories like this use Playboy bunnies?
That was ...interesting, I was hoping for some female to be bimbofied but this is cool too, so when Applejack gets caught maybe you should tie her to a pole wearing nothing but her underwear and Rarity does a pole dance with Applejack as the pole
Hey man just thought Iâd tell ya thanks for putting in that % meter letting us know how much of the chapter you have done and I look forward to reading it. Also I really recommend you have Applejack get captured and taken to that club Rarity and the others have been going to every night if thatâs okay.
Kind of makes you wonder if Starlight was easier to convert due to some part of her wanting this. But now you really got me wanting to see the two become a couple even outside the establishment. Like when the two are together alone she starts to become absent minded and giddy around him, not realizing that she's making herself more approachable to him. Forming a bimbo-ish bubbly crush for Big Mac.
But if Mac is bimbofied, please keep him male. Hate to take Bimbolight's favorite sex buddy away from her.
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this chapter! You described the trances, the slippery thoughts, the whole general brainwashing setup in a way that I found to be incredibly fun and engaging.
Hey AcidPanic I like how your story is so far, I was just wondering if I could get more of the girl to girl lesbian like the Doggie Pie , will that come up next chapter or few chapters down the road?
Iâm just making sure youâre absolutely sure itâs on the 22nd so we donât get disappointed itâs not on that date which in a few hours will probably be today (or if you read this comment now today than it probably is today).
Interesting role to give Starlight...
Sure; Go all out on it. But if you want, you can give a warning for the parts that contain it so people who hate it can skip I guess.
Also only part 1 of the poll was available to choose. That's normal right?
Also please bimbofy Mac.
Goodluck with IRL!
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I THINK so, I never used this site before, but there should only be one question
Great job. I liked how you made this chapter. I loved that you included Starlight. I wonder what they want from Mac. It's also good to see that the stallions are being affected (I know that the majority of ponies are female, but it was good to see that the native Stallions are being corrupted in some way as well. At least become blind to what is going on.) I think you are doing a great job. I do wonder one thing though. How has all of this escaped Twilight and Spike. I wonder what is going to happen to them. Best of luck. Great job.
Are you ever going to write a story with femdom in it?
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Yeah I also wonder about Twilight. Is she ensnared or is she oblivious? It seems too widespread to be ignorable but she can be oblivious at times, plus intimidating to target. Starlight being there implies they have no problem controlling dangerous magicians though.
Why don't more stories like this use Playboy bunnies?
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I have one with femdomme femsub already, malesub is something I'd be super down to do, but I'd need to find the space for it
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I don't know! I'm a big fan of the fishnets, the bowtie, the littly poofy tail, I hope to get to revisit it at sum point.
Bimbofy Macđłplease and thank you.
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I did not expect this to be a recurring request, I shall give it a look
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Well...ponepony ask first... and I thought it was ok for me to ask too.
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It absolutely is! Unexpected but definitely not unwanted
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When you say Bimbofy, what do you mean. You mean turn Mac into a female, or into a muscular stallion meant to only please ponies?
That was ...interesting, I was hoping for some female to be bimbofied but this is cool too, so when Applejack gets caught maybe you should tie her to a pole wearing nothing but her underwear and Rarity does a pole dance with Applejack as the pole
If thatâs okay with you of course
Also in the next chapter was Starlightâs plan for Big Mac to trick Applejack into a trap and make her into a new bimbo girl
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I was thinking the latter but we'll see what happens
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The latter; Was hoping Bic Mac to look like 1941584 in Derpi (it's not his character, but eh) while remaining male.
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Cute idea! though this may be a few chapters out, I can neither confirm nor deny Starlight/'mysterious' figures plans for Mac at this time :p
Thanks oh and hey maybe they should torture Applejack in pleasure
Hey man just thought Iâd tell ya thanks for putting in that % meter letting us know how much of the chapter you have done and I look forward to reading it.
Also I really recommend you have Applejack get captured and taken to that club Rarity and the others have been going to every night if thatâs okay.
Kind of makes you wonder if Starlight was easier to convert due to some part of her wanting this. But now you really got me wanting to see the two become a couple even outside the establishment. Like when the two are together alone she starts to become absent minded and giddy around him, not realizing that she's making herself more approachable to him. Forming a bimbo-ish bubbly crush for Big Mac.
But if Mac is bimbofied, please keep him male. Hate to take Bimbolight's favorite sex buddy away from her.
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Dawwwww hate to break up a matched set eh? <3
I'm not much for shipping but I'll do my best!
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this chapter! You described the trances, the slippery thoughts, the whole general brainwashing setup in a way that I found to be incredibly fun and engaging.
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Hey thanks!
I often worry I let all the flowery language get in the way of the stuff I/people actually come for (dat hypno stuff!) so I'm glad you like it!
Hey AcidPanic I like how your story is so far, I was just wondering if I could get more of the girl to girl lesbian like the Doggie Pie , will that come up next chapter or few chapters down the road?
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Thanks
I promise she will return soonish, sometime in the next few chapters but not in this coming one
The biggest question on my mind is how AppleJack will be involved. The suspense is killer.
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Should be addressed in the next chapter, which I will have oodles of time to finish up ASAP in 3 days <3
OOOOOHHH CANâT WAITâźď¸
Pinkie Pie:EEEEEAAAAKâźď¸Iâm so NERVEXITED
Applejack:You do realize thatâs not a real word, rightâ
Wait a minute , are you positive itâll be ready on December 22nd at the latest?
Iâm just making sure youâre absolutely sure itâs on the 22nd so we donât get disappointed itâs not on that date which in a few hours will probably be today (or if you read this comment now today than it probably is today).