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Citrus Recluse


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Well... This is... somewhat interesting.

Well, that was certainly a...nice start, I am interested in seeing where this'll go.

Also to see Scootaloo's reaction to cheerleader dash :rainbowlaugh:

Will spike into barb ?!???!?!

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Uh ... nooo?

If that were going to the case, I would have put "genderbending" in the warnings section.

How did the main six get those sports stuffs in the first place?

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If you're asking what I assume you're asking, the answer is "that will be revealed later." But it should be obvious from the prologue.

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I figured as much.

I was looking for that to be tagged as one of the groups, and was happy to find that it wasn't

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Looks like you got downvote-bombed by the type of Spike fan who always want to see him as some sort of super-virile fucks-all-the-wimminz type of character and never anything else.

Would have liked to see bimbo Barb, you're not alone random crazypants person. Have an upvote.

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Interesting. I wonder what the camp's going to do to the boys then... If they're going to brainwash them into being okay with all the bimbofication going on around them, maybe pair them up with some of the bimbofied girls. That could be neat!

Is there going to be some age TF in this one with cmc and dt?

I live the cheerleader rainbow. I hope to see some fan art of this

"She walked to where the golf ball landed, twirling the club in her head"

that would give me a horrible migraine.

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Oh come on, really? I fixed that, like, twice in editing and it still slipped through.

It should say in her hand. In her HAND.

7621775 No no keep it head it makes it more fun XD

It's sure as heck taking Luna and Celestia far longer to get to Ponyville than it should... but hey, plot demands it so it shall be.

You sir have corrupted me with more lust and sin than I could have ever thought to have seen in my life so far....

and I am fine with this. Great chapter man, and I cant wait to see what you have in store next

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Sex is overly stigmatized, and not an inherently bad thing no matter what those dusty holy books say!

Granted, you could probably find better, more mature role models for healthy sexual relationships than in my writing.

I sure hope that we don't have to wait another year for the next chapter.

It involved a lot of pumping the pretend victim's chest, taking in deep, deep breaths before blowing into their mouths hard, and making sure the victim was flat on their backs. It wasn't like in the movies, for sure.

Just a fyi(and my ocd kicking in) CPR courses and certification no longer do chest pumps because it was proven to actually be entirely ineffective and more likely to harm the individual you're giving CPR to (cracked ribs, bruising, etc).

I'd like to see Diamond convert Apple Bloom through seduction:trollestia:

7661337 uh, since when? I had to retake the course two months ago to keep my CPR certification active, and the course (which was directly run by the Florida state government) still taught chesr compressions...

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True, but you have a way of making it awesome and great, so don't feel too bad about your writing. Its inherently amazing and gripping to read, and I thoroughly enjoy it.

Improved CMC vs Camp Bimbo, I wonder who will win

Oh god, if Sunset gets cured she is going to be puking for days, poor thing.

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I'm not a medical expert. :derpytongue2:

If I thought it was important to this particularly, I might have done some research ... but it's all just a backdrop to for the fun times.
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She just needs to digest for awhile.:trollestia: Maybe some antacids.

7662010 No no, not that. She'd be puking because she fucked Snips and Snails, she's going to be so disgusted with herself.

7662010 get dat bitch some Pepto Bismol. She's gonna need a swiggie'o da pink stuffs.

Mhmm, nice. Now make the girls even more submissive, little by little, and I'll be super happy.

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That's not mutually exclusive.:raritywink: Sunset already showed the way.

7661406 Yeah I derped, super tired last night, it's not chest compressions but mouth to mouth that was removed from the certification. Think I need some sleep if my brain swapped facts :ajsleepy:

"That's a shame," Fluttershy said. "But I guess if you don't want to, I'll have to go and get one of the other girls to do it..."
"O-other girls?" Cheerilee was afraid to ask, but she did so anyway.
"Oh, yes," Fluttershy said, crouching down near Cheerilee. "Those delightful Cutie Mark Crusaders. Tell me, Cheerilee, which do you think would prefer breast milk better? Sweetie Belle, or Scootaloo?"

This part was dark, specially considering AJ is actually helping. :applejackconfused:

Rarity watched Spike go, her eyes tracking his movement, occasionally glancing at his equipment. "Mmm..." She couldn't wait to suck out another load and steal his vitality from him again.

Nope. Nothing suspicious here :twilightoops:

Uh oh... snips snails.. your inability to say no and be anything but diplorable may have ruined everything..

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Yeah, I remember when I was planning that I wanted a moment that actually showed, "hey, wait, this is actually a serious problem."

Granted, I wanted that to be the moment everyone else realized Spike was right and they needed to do something. and more importantly it being less... easy, I guess, with it more being of Cheerilee doing an active heroic sacrifice, letting herself be corrupted so the others could get away instead of just... kinda standing there and letting it happen.

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Are you sure you shouldn´t be adding a "Dark" tag?

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Reasonably sure. It should just be that one moment.

As opposed to say something like ... oh, Mistress Adagio, where the entire thing is Sunset slowly becoming corrupted and bent to Adagio's will and powerless to stop it.

That's not sex, VP Luna. It's more like a blowjob

"Well, well, well!" Snails drawled, sticking himself out the window. "Not so high and mighty now, are you, Spike?" Snails crossed his arms.

Oh fuck off Snails, you didn't even try to resist.

"NO!" Sweetie Belle began to slap him around the head and shoulders. Scootaloo and Apple Bloom rushed in to try and stop her. "How - could you - have sex - with - my sister, you - dirty, rotten - perverted piece of filth!"

Okay, Sweetie is pissed. When this is all over I hope that Spike and Sweetie will still be friends.:fluttershysad:
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Rarity watched Spike go, her eyes tracking his movement, occasionally glancing at his equipment. "Mmm..." She couldn't wait to suck out another load and steal his vitality from him again.

Nope. Nothing suspicious here :twilightoops:

Yeah, I also noticed this bit, seems things are getting real now huh? It's funny, Spike is concerned with taking advantage of Rarity, but really it's Rarity taking advantage of Spike. When this is over, there is going to be one heck of an awkward conversation between these two.

7704634 are we going to see trixie and starlight into sport bimbo:$

I do rather like seeing someone try to resist and fail. Wonder how many more times that'll happen...

Not sure whom Bezam is. I saw the first season before, and don't recall him off the top of my head. And I wonder if continued exposure will leave Sunset's boys as boys. After all, the princesses said that continued exposure would turn them all into floozies. XD

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I imagine that'd do what I've been told is "broification," where, like bimbofication, they turn into sex-obessed caricatures of human beings, but with ridiculous muscles instead of breasts, sports instead of makeup, (ignoring the unusual paring of sports and bimbos in this story) and "dude" instead of "like." So it's kinda like where bimbos have "Valley Girl," "himbos" have "Surfer Dude."

7781434 I figured it'd be more like a gender bending effect rather than that.:\

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Perhaps I should have written it differently, then. Ah, well, just say it's your head canon and call it a day.

Aaww it's already over?:fluttercry:

ayh

How did Sunset get cured?

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