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Not bad, not bad at all... Blueblood didn't come off as his usual dingleberry of a self. Nice 'fic! I could see it working out better in one of those 'Blueblood isn't a total waste of space' continuities where he actually lives up to his heritage and treated Rarity like he did for any number of reasons. Mostly because gold diggers and she not being his type.
Exclamation: NO!
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Eh, honestly in my opinion there's no excuse for how he treated Rarity. I still hate Blueblood. That's why the only way I could write him was out of character. If he was in-character he would have taken advantage of Celestia. I don't think he'd actually violently rape anypony, but use trickery and/or schemes to get what he wanted? Maybe use guilt or coercion to convince her to have sex with him? You bet. That's not the kind of story I wanted to write however, so I had to write him as out of character. That's probably why I'm at odds with this story. It's just not believable to me that Blueblood is actually a nice guy.
This was a good read but I felt that PBB's character fits better if he had been presented as a teenager. Still, this was a fun read, keep it up.
Nice start so far. Personally though, I'd choose Luna over Celestia.
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I'm glad you noticed that because that's exactly what I was going for. I wanted him to have the sexual mentality of a teenager despite the fact that he's in his mid to late twenties. That's why I described how Celestia had kept mares away from him his whole life. Just like a teenager he has absolutely NO sexual experience. It's only natural that he developed sexual attraction to the mares around him - including his aunt(s). This is one of the ways I wrote his character so the reader wouldn't get the impression that he was a prick.
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Shhhhhhh...don't tell anypony but there might be a sequel involving just that.
Nice not bad so far
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Agreed. Some of them, like 'Where is my love?' say he acted like that because he was already in love and used it to scare away potential suitors. Then you got one like Gilded Sister where with the addition of a little sister, Blueblood is growing up to be better already. But yeah, this was well done.
I think I'm the same as you in that matter, but I liked to have a different Celestia in this kind of stories, one that hasn't taken the whole castle stuff or the whol guardponies into her bed and Blueblood nearly looked as if he had a reason to be "the as####e" he normally seems to be.
That was what kind of made this good for me or at least made me realize I want to read the full thing.
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Hhhhhmmmmm a sequel or an alternate story? It would depend on the "reasons" background story again to make it look good for me I suppose.
I mean a reason why Blueblood also want to go after Luna or why Luna actually wants to do it with him. I think you made them dislike each other a bit in this story. I know what kind of story this is but in anything close to a harem story I really like it if I can understand why the characters "maybe even fall in love with each other" instead of just adding a bunch or partners without any background story. The only problem with my request right now I assume would be that it isn't about love for them here and more like a compromise solution.
I can't say how I would think of it but I assume it would be different if it's just an alternate chapter, a what if.
I kind of feel like you missed out on an opportunity by not calling this: An Incestring Proposition
And another with his pet name for her not being 'Auntia'.
But other than that, I liked this a lot.
I assume those drive-by downvotes are just because of the [Blueblood] tag, and that's unfortunate, because this was really good.
Did you mean ‘cowardice’?
It would be great to see more of this.
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Is this story actually a one shot but with a incomplete tag on it? I was interested to see how this goes but... yeah....
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Was planning on continuing it but things have got in the way. If I do decide to continue it it'll probably be a sequel instead.
This story is 'believable' which in my opinion makes it better. Amazing job. I'd love to see a follow-up chapter if your still writing.