A new hero has risen in Canterlot, protecting poor and rich, innocent and guilty, and even the Princesses. Known only as the Blue Knight, this courageous pony faces off against evildoers with a smile and a quirky comment. Nopony knows who he is, only that he must be the most noble stallion in the world.
Meanwhile, Blueblood, one of the few ponies born without Celestia's mental block on violence, is struggling. Ever since he was a colt, he's pushed everypony away in an attempt to keep them safe from the harm he might do them. Now, with his rise to the Hero of Canterlot, he struggles against keeping those he protects safe from evil, while also keeping them away from him.
In the large city of Baltimare, a stallion is growing his power. Born without any form of violence block, he embraces his killer side, using it to hoard power and money. When he chances upon twins with the same blessing as he, a scheme to usurp Equestria's throne begins to form.
This story is part of the HoE storyline.
Extra tags include drama and mystery. Sex tag for implied intentions.
Other characters: Mane 6
Princess Cadance
Shining Armor
what is HOE?
One small typo. *stallion
Nice! Had to chuckle at the title as I also made a colored knight a few years back
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Mistake? What mistake? I never make mistakes
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Heroes of Equestria. It's on my home page.
Nicely done! It's quite a unique idea that Blueblood is just acting
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Thank you!
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You're welcome! I really found it a pity that Blueblood only got shown once in the show
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Aye. I felt potential for a Blueblood story that is canon acceptable and shows him in a good light. As far as I've found, there are no such stories.
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THen you are in luck, a friend of mine sees it the same way and made also that in his universe, Blueblood is a good guy
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Are you, perhaps, speaking of Raleigh? I haven't read his work, but I do understand the general concept. In my story with Blueblood, it's canon acceptable both in line with the HOE storyline and MLP FiM storyline. In case you haven't read the blog, HOE is the culmination of this story, Equestria's Ray of Hope, and Blood Moon.
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No, it's another author, called Purple Patch, also has his own group.
He is also, who designed that other "colored" knight I mentioned with me.
You have me intrigued, and that is good, considering I too, have a whole lot of work with school myself. but seeing this really helps calm me down. blueblood really is open to characterization in any way you see it. Even with what the comics have put out you still have a lot that can work with him. He can be an obvious villain, but I see him as a misunderstood noble that just had a bad night. They really should have given him at least one more scene, but all we can do is write out who he is. As you are doing, and very well might I add. I admittedly could tell that the Blue Knight was Blueblood, but you have an interesting story and I can't wait to see what the Blue Knight is capable of.
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Well, I mean, Blueblood being the Blue Knight shouldn't come as a surprise to any readers. I intentionally put it in the description. Anyways, thanks for the comment. I haven't had the time to hunt down and read the MLP comics (it is on the bucket list), but as far as depictions of Blueblood, there are too few. This story is kinda three in one. It lets you see good Blueblood, awful Blueblood, and straight out depressive Blueblood. This, in all honesty, could've technically been a rated E story, but I decided to give it more depth, violence, and intensity, just so the outcome of the story isn't hazy, but rather, unseen.
This strikes me as being inspired by dexter. Even if it isn't it shares strong similaraties both are more violent than the average population and swear to protect the more peaceful populous from others like them but with signifigantly less morals. I like it.
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I actually haven't watched Dexter, as I don't watch TV-MA or R. I do get the reference, though. Although the Blue Knight has a whole bunch of morals.
Nice work!
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Thanks!
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You're welcome!
Good chapter
I like the generic story of a protector in the city, but with a more melancholic tone. The struggle is real with the Blue Knight and I love it. Also Gardener Pony! Gotta love a gardener pony.
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Thank you!!
Sounds like an old friend to me. great work!
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It's fine, better late than never. Great work as always. Two things I noticed
So he fakes something that he fakes already?
You mean worse, right?
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He's faking his entire Prince Blueblood persona, Everything he "feels" emotionally as the Prince is false. Also, yes, I meant worse,.
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Of course. Just felt odd to read, you know?
for some reason, I never got a notification of this until i checked manually
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Well, I don't know why that happened, but the actual chapter came out. I know there was some confusion because I added a chapter but didn't publish it, but here it is.
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strange isn't it?
This chapter i got notified, nice work!
Oh my God she's like a Lois Lane always putting herself in danger
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Except more forced, and less stupid.
Edit: And a gardener.
better late than never
Worth the wait i say. He could have been a bit calmer/polite with lily
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His strategy: Make her think about what was being yelled in her face, not what she'd done. Besides, after this second attack on her, and repeated attempts to distance her from him (given it was only in a day) he's a little stressed too. Oh, and that whole 1000 word fight scene could weigh in a little as well.
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of course
On a roll, eh?
Nicely done
Nice job!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Your welcome, keep up the good work
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Yessir!
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Funny how i found your Story, given the title
nicely done!
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Dang, that was quick! Thanks!
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You'rre welcome, i just got email notification on
better late than never
What’s HoE storyline?
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The Heroes of Equestria storyline is the universe in which all my fics being written right now reside in. It basically chronicles the history of G4 in my universe.
nicely done, love the caring of luna