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you clearly have read "galaxy in flames" horus heresy book but i would still like to ask few questions. In that book Horus, Erebus and demon talked about the war they would wage. In it Horus said that he would not use demons help yet sou there was no demons on istvaan 3. Sou why and how was this world eater taken in the warp and survived for ten thousand years? And how does he knew about god emperor? because during that time it was not a thing and practising such things would end up him dead. And what comes to not killing xenos, well he would still believe in imperial truth switch is that galaxy in mankind's birth right sou there is no place for xenos. And he would not have any problems killing innocents or civilians, infact they were famous for their butchery. In istvaan 3 they went full on killing thousands of civilians ho attacked them with knifes and hands.
Ermmm... Look, I'm not an expert on all things Warhammer, but aren't Khorne and the Emperor arch enemies?
This is getting interesting
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They are
Okay that is a insult for his pride as a astartes. It is either his full title or nothing, remember that space marines commonly think they are better that others, especially world eaters. For a example space wolfs do not want to be called space wolfs in their word only ignorant and fools use it. They want to be called vylka fenrika.
that is a lie there was interex, and there was aspirax and few nomad eldars, but they were in a way of imperiums conquest.
How does he know all this? He is from 30 millenium, during thous times they were warp entities not demons, he would not have any idea how demons work because no one knew in thous times.
Okay, please, please, please get an editor. The story itself, while interesting, is in desperate need of one.
BURN THE SOLAR HERETICS OF THE SOLAR EMPIRE
FOR THE NEW LUNAR REPUBLIC AND THE EMPEROR
Quote: Ivanakrushu
My god, man. I desperately wanted to like this story. Really, I did. The opener was good. It effectively introduced the main character and his struggles, the action was not too over the top, and the premise was good.
But I had to throw in the towel at chapter 3.. It was just a constant barrage of one run-on sentence after the other. It completely ruined my immersion. You seriously need an editor.
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what that mean?
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Response: It sounds like 'I vanna krush you' when you say it out loud.
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I know, you are not the first person to bring this up and I doubt you'll be the last, but I cannot aquire an editor at this time, and believe me, I try to cut down the dialogue as much as possible because I am well of this short-coming in my writing ability. (You should've seen my first fanfic on FanFiction.net, I've come MILES compared to that train wreck.)
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The dialogue is not really the problem. Let's use the opener as an example
That's three sentences written as a single one. Here's how it should look
https://www.dictionary.com/browse/run-on-sentence
https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/grammar/runonsentences
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Ah, I'll see if I can work on that.
small nitpicks but there they are.
During great crusade army made of normal humans was called Imperial army, and they did not use commissars like you said few chapters back. And you said mechcanicus at one point switch is not true during great crusade,when they were united they were called mechanicum. But when Horus heresy started is broke to dark mechanicum and mechanicus, latter led by Calleb Decima. And about that librarian thing, well they were not called librarians because of council of Nikea. There was a world called Thawra switch is in war against army of psykers. Malcador the sigilite sees it as a danger to Emperors ultimate plan so all usage of psychic powers all banned and titles for them taken from them.
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All right, fair enough, I did not know about the imperial army and I always thought Commissars were always a thing and I thought mechanicum and mechanicus were just two different names for them.
As for the Librarian, I was misled on that one, I first learned of Istvaan 3 when I downloaded Horus Heresy: Drop Assault, and that game let's you have Librarians, but only for the World Eaters and Emperor's Children, while the Sons of Horus and the Death Guard get beefed up Terminators. But in hindsight, I should've double checked that as this game also called the Istvaan 3 Atrocity the Dropsite Massacre. Oops.
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well like i said very minor nitpicks, After the Horus heresy imperial army was deemed too dangerous as a unified force sou it was separated to imperial navy and astra militarum, then it was deemed necessary that every regiment was given commissar to keep it in order sou they would not become traitors again. You could of course say that that particular regiment had commisars as a tradition from their world as regiments came from different cultures. And what was for that nikea thing, well essentially when massive amount of psykers fight against one another it creates massive storm in the warp switch makes veil between materium and warp very thin. When a rift opened and massive amount of warp energy came thru, three chimera tanks sprouted legs and mouths and thous psykers where heavily mutated. Sou a meeting was made with all primarchs, in the end all psykers within the legion was to never use their powers and was relocated as a tactical marines. There was a example in one of Garros books that when one ultramarines used his psychic powers to save his brothers, he was hated because he did it because he was oath bound to never use them.
Of course his name is Aries.
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Naturally, at first I was thinking of having him forget his name and adopt a more Equestrian name, War Hound, but decided against it.
I like
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Thank you.
Wha...what? thous are not some form of thrusters, they are and i quote from the space marine codex "Heat is provided by the power core and thermal build-up can be vented via backpack's distinctive nozzels."
If you mean to help balance then there is lyman's ear switch and i quote " implanted within the inner-ear, this can filter out or enhance specific sounds and provides a superior sense of balance."
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Yeah, see, I saw a YouTube video where a loyalist was fighting a traitor and one of them used those sphere shaped objects as engines and someone made a comment about thinking that they worked like you said, and someone else said that they work as small thrusters because that battery pack throws them off balance (but stresses the difference between this and a jump pack). And finally when I considered writing this, I Googled it....turns out that it's split down the middle with people believing one way or the other and Games Workshop....is Games Workshop. (Did you know their latest book actually confirmed that BS about bolt rounds being the size of soda cans, they just don't care anymore.)
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Never have i ever heard such thing used in combat, at best if you mean that backpack can make small burst of hot air made to move at vacuum of space switch is not anywhere a same thing as used in high gravity. Power armor is made to be connected in black carapace, in where when body part moves, armor moves at same time sou there is no actual weight to be carried. Sou there would be no balance issue. And no book i heard has ever compared bolt round to soda can.
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Not a book, the Bolter rules for the tabletop game. Games Workshop describes them as being the size of a soda can.
I'll find you a link.
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https://youtu.be/P4JQjRya-Lo
Dash be like shit shit shit
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warhammer community has nothing to do with actual lore. They are only written sou that thous ho have not read anything about 40k:s lore has something to compare. But if there was a book that said that they are size of a soda can, then i would be pissed off. Its like saying that thous small comical comics are cannon in lore.
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Ah, thanks for clearing that up.
BURN THE SOLAR HERETICS OF THE SOLAR EMPIRE
FOR THE NEW LUNAR REPUBLIC
Typical Rainbow Dash.
Indeed why should he be worried?
That was sweet of him to comfort the CMC.
Yay I really like this my guy
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Glad to hear it.
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actually During the Great Crusade when it came to the Xenos it was more of a "Submit or Die", because the Emperor didnt mind working with Xenos as long as he achieved his goal. As for the God-Emperor thing Chaos Daemons would have told him or Khorne Would have.
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Actually, the God Emperor thing was an accident on my part.
As for the xenos, Khorne personally told him "I want these things dead" so that would cause him to believe that they can be useful in his vendetta against the blood god. (The enemy of my enemy dies second)
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i didnt know the God-Emperor thing was an accident.
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Yeah, I didn't really know that he wasn't called that until after the heresy, my bad.
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its alright, and i hope you come with a new chapter soon because this story was really good.
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I try to post weekly, but at the most, it takes two weeks.
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Name one species ho submitted to the imperiums rule. Because i have went thru Horus heresy books and there is not a single one that was not immediately destroyed. Only human colonies were given the alternative. Emperor not once did ally with xenos, not even once.
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Those monkey things (I believe that they are called Jotaro) and even if they're not 'Allies' allies, the imperium has worked with orks, aeldari, drukari, tau, and others in order to best stronger enemies. And Sanctioned Xenos are a thing.
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not during great crusade, and not by the order of the emperor. During great crusade there were multiple xenocides against other species even to some abhumans. Jokaeros are essentially slaves, they do not speak gothic and are only used by inqusition. In a book Pandorax there was one such speciment and local catachans almost shot it upon seeing it. Its a same thing as radical inqusition using demon weapons to fight chaos forces.
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Fair enough, but when the imperium encountered the Laer, there was talk of making them a 'protectorate'. Fulgrim shut it down, but the fact that there's even a name for it does make you think.
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Normal humans can say all ideas they want but a primarch ho follows imperial truth will follow strict orders to conquer the galaxy for mankind. There was a text in prospero burns book where a imperial army officer had problems fighting against eldar. Space wolves responded and slaughtered the eldar from their city. Officer cursed and regretted this and voiced his opinion to Space wolves captain that they were too savage and brutal. Space wolves captain did not care because it was his duty.
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Yes. This is true. But after being betrayed by his primarch and brothers and fighting chaos for 10,000 years, Aries' priorities are less about securing humanity's dominance and more about ensuring their survival.
This is also the justification behind several, if not all, alliances with the xenos race post heresy.
I know Aries doesn't know about those, but he does know that Khorne wants the ponies dead, and the enemy of my enemy dies second.
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That i can understand, for emperors plan was to secure humanity's safety sou that there would not be any big enough threats against humanity. Because during great crusade there was no reason to ally with anyone because crusade was sou powerful that there was nothing that had a change against them. But now during 42 millenium humanity in besiege by all sides, its no longer certain victory.
But thats not the point, Der kaiser says that all xenos are given a change to join imperium even thou this has never happened.
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Ah yeah, I see that.
No, that's not the case. Sanctioned Xenos didn't become a thing until very VERY recently.
I'm liking the training so far. I'm sensing rather short life expectancies for these PDF troopers if and when the Chaos forces arrive, unfortunately.