Hello everyone! I'm a Anime lover, an avid gamer. Kinda a crappy writter but eh im trying
Venerable Dreadnought Stratta, One of the oldest Ancients of the Lamenters Space Marine Chapter is lost in the warp due to a warp jump gone wrong. Though despite what should've happened it seems the chaos gods have other plans...
T rated for now but its subject to change
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Very interesting, I admit to being more curious about this line. I look forward to reading more Kinsmen.
Primarch of the forgotten 2nd Legion
Did you just... Kill off the Mane 6? And everyone else? Well, that's certainly a change in direction, I'll give you that. Is that a depowered Celestia he's carrying?
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Perhaps i did perhaps i didn't. I certainly wont tell before the time is right as for question two same answer. Playing my cards close to my chest with this one.
ah story about the Sad Taxicap-Bois in MLP? i am in!
A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one.
If you are going to rewrite the story, you should at least remove the other chapters that you will no longer use.
What you do is up to you.
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The point of this was to gauge interest as was stated in the authors note. Its to see what the readers want. It is ultimately my decision. but i want to take my readers wants and wishes into account
So Celestia invokes the nuclear option, the city is dust, and a damned legionnaire up and charges this poor dreadnaught with taking care of little Celly.
Huh.
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From a certain point of view. IT was left ambiguous on purpose as to what exactly caused the the destruction. Whether or not I choose to reveal what happens we shall see
Great chapter keep up the great work
Glad to see this story still up and going? Gonna do a full re-write?
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Potentially. Personally speaking i like the direction of this plotline more the other. The comments seem to agree
I wish you the best on this, I liked the original far better.
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I thank you for that, the original had a mix of a light and dark tone to it. Leaning more to the light. Ill try to find my way to a similar balance but this story was meant to be a bit more gritty
Purple or blue guys woyld do, provided they with have psyker in tow..Single marine... very sad creature in any setting.
Yeesh how far in the past are that Celestia doesn’t have a rainbow mane? Or did she lose her rainbow mane in that explosion?
IT’S ALIVE
ALIIIIIIIIVE!!!
In all seriousness, it’s great to see this updated!
Also, did Celestia and Luna do a soul fusion or something?
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Thank you that means quite alot to me to hear that! On your question it will be revealed in good time, but I will say its a bit more complicated then that
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. . . Did Celestia, Luna, and the Mane Six soul fuse? Or do you mean the thing that created this new Alicorn was in itself more complicated than a soul fusion or something?
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All in due time my friend.
that's a Danmed Legion member from the unluckly Raptorus. o.o all i know is when one of those guys shows up shit has hit the fan H E A V L I Y.
Did not expect a comeback
You're.
You're is short for you are and your means that something belongs to you. Example:
You're not good at differentiating you're/your
Your ability to differentiate You're/your isn't very good.
Your welcome.
Ps: I hope you noticed the your welcome, because it was wrong.
For this, the wait was worth every minute.
Equastria, behold the greatest weapon of the Adeptus Astartes. The ability to breath life into the guttering embers of hope until it becomes an all-consuming firestorm. The Imperium's enemies have learned that through ten millenia of war. Even a single Space Marine appearing can and has given a Guard company the drive to stand against overwhelming odds and prevail. Here we have a captain of a 2nd company, next to the 1st the most experienced and tested of a Codex chapter, entombed in a dreadnought. A walking war machine who can obliterate an entire warband of orcs without support.
Run changlings. Run as far as you can, dig your hole as deep as you dare, and pull the mountains over you. In the end your bodies will burn and thirsting gods will claim your souls.
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they with have?
Those are not words I expected to find right after each other. What does it even mean?
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Thank you for the correction. My autism and mild dyslexia knows no bounds. Even accidentally clicking publish on a chapter I was working on that I had to quickly undo lol. It shocks me to see the numbers on this story frankly, something I am certain I do not deserve I do hope you've enjoyed so far though! I have plans to continue soon hopefully.
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well said brother. Well said indeed.
No mas caps? :'v