A Sweetie Dream Land

by Lucar

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During the fight against Sweetie Belle, Void was briefly sent to a dimension entirely plunged in darkness.

A dimension... that was actually a prison to a being of light.

But because of what happened, the chains of darkness were weakened, giving the being of light the opportunity to slowly start to free himself of them.

---

The prison of darkness had a twin, this one of light, keeping prisoner a being of darkness. However, the prison of darkness had been using the being of darkness to sustain itself. With it weakening, the being of darkness was beginning to regain his strength, also weakening the prison of light which also helped the being of light.

One day, the two beings will be free.

---

In a space between spaces, a mottled, purple-black void laced by lightning with some rare purple ground, a supernatural entity of god-like powers felt the weakening of the prisons.

"The prisons are weakening... What happened? No matter... I will have to act!"

To be continued...

Comments

[Spellflame]

Hahahahahahahaha!!!!
I can’t believe I fell for that.

[prism heart]

And so Galeem and Dharkon are getting free.

[Spellflame]

10590392
Can we get a ranking of the strongest cmc to the weakest cmc with all 9 crusaders?

[Lucar]

10590491
Mmh... From strongest to weakest, I would say:
1-A Sweetie Dreamland Sweetie Belle
2-Phantom
3-Apple Bloom's Mansion Apple Bloom
4-Apple Bloom's Mansion Sweetie Belle
5-Apple Bloom's Mansion Scootaloo
6, 7, 8, 9-The others, who are still simple fillies.

[Kichi]

Waiting for the sequel, just remember to tell everyone when is coming, even if I could not think another chapter soon

[Heavy759]

All i have to say is bravo this was quite a story

[Spellflame]

10590497
And how long will that last?

[Lucar]

10590738
I have no idea.

[Wilddog88]

10591185
I’m working on a Super Smash Bro ultimate story myself. However Sci-twi is going to be the first one but she’s been hit with a darkness curse and stuck as Midnight Sparkle

[Maxentirunos]

Damn, such a great story. I tried for the longest times to make a fanfiction novelization of the kirby games, without success. There was always things that didn't pleased me and the greatest difficulty was that I had to make it from Kirby POV, but how? as Kirby characterization is very hard. I even tried to maybe actually give him a personality but it wasn't Kirby anymore

You circumvent that by having a completely outside perspective to the Kirby cast that participate in all adventures. It's great, your fan theories that explain the lore are fantastic, you place even the one character that is so hard to place in the chronologies (Galacta Knight) seemingly in your story after building him and his father up for almost 80 chapters.

Great job, excellent writing, and perfect for a read

[Lucar]

10602148
Thank you very much! If it can help you, Kirby does have a personality. He is depicted as a "jolly little boy" in one of the games, and he loves his friends, eating, and sleeping. And he is always ready to help, like when the Sun and the Moon are fighting each other, or when Dedede is kidnapped by Taranza. This story depicts Kirby's personality very well, I think. Or, at worst, you can take the one from the anime, without him trying to escape each time someone is after him.

[Maxentirunos]

10602308
When I talk about Kirby personality, I didn't meant the grand lines, the motivations, which you well described. I talked more about things like how would he see Dreamland other inhabitants, why would he eat them or not, how he discover his copy ability and learn of it, his though process, this kind of things.

I tried first to write him as chaotic good, but which chaotic good eat sentient peoples? I mean, you can try the 'not all sentients', but you can totally eat bandana dee in multiples games. After he is shown to be able to talk. Which is why I love your 'Kirby eating doesn't kill target'

Thanks for the recommendation, I go read that now.

[Fluffy-Boi]

10630427
Yeah. He is bad guy. .but not bad guy. Like Zangief said.

[Skulljack17]

Hoooweee, this was a labor of love. So much was put into this, to make it such an engaging read. Tying so many aspects of Kirby lore together. Silly moments, sad ones, nail-biting clashes along with awkward times now and then. There were many times when reading this story was pure joy, such as when Twilight and the others are talking about the strange, weird and often funny things that Sweetie went through on her adventures. And in the end, more often than not, it wasn't a bad guy getting punched in the face or blown up by a super laser or whatever that helped save the day. (That is not to say that they didn't help, of course. Punching and lasers are cool!) But it was the friendship and bonds that Sweetie Belle and her friends made that helped them stand strong and find the strength to press on and prevail against those that would do her and her friends harm.

I just hope in the sequel that filly finally gets the chance to admit to herself that yes, she LIKE likes that pink puffball, and the awkwardness that might happen from it. Don't spoil it for me, just let me imagine how that may play out for now rather than confirming or denying my desire.

[Lucar]

10640514
You re very welcome! That was a pleasure. Kirby is really a perfect universe to use for crossovers with My Little Pony. The last few games really use the power of friendship. It's a wonder that there aren't many crossovers with Kirby despite this.

[SuperMoonPro]

10666382
I hope Kirby becomes more powerful than sweetie Belle in the sequel to the smash bros story he is the God of Friendship after all

[Teraunce]

solid exceptionally excellent 9.2/10 story even with some minor grammar and spelling errors and some weird sentence structuring.

[Lucar]

11027978
Thanks. I will have to do a rewriting one of these days. This story was my first story in English.

[Teraunce]

11027084
Magalor Soul does not survive his defeat/death in the semi-canonicity of the Extra Hard mode. Odd however how you kept switching between ex-mode and normal mode, sometimes merging the two.
Then again I'm a sucker for a happy end and its now time to read the Scootaloo story.

[DockingWater17]

11146610
We know that there are several characters who can manipulate the 4 Matters. Would it be possible to remove the 4 Matters from another being, for example Sweetie Belle Soul, forcing her to go back to base form, even just temporarily?

[Lucar]

11147088
Beings with great control over energies could do this, but it wouldn't work on Sweetie Belle Soul because she's too damn powerful. She would just out-power anyone attempting to block her access to energies unless they are Third Category Gods (Gods who are truly omnipotent, omniscient, and omnipresent, like the Christian God. Because in this form, she's at that to be one). Or they would need the equivalent of a few dozens Void to out-power her.
But if they do manage to somehow block the energies from her, they would still need to weaken her enough for her to recover her senses, and even without the energies, she is still a strong, skilled fighter so this wouldn't be easy.

[DockingWater17]

11147127
Didn't Stella Knight beat Sweetie Belle Soul or is Alicorn of the Void still Sweetie Belle Soul?

[Lucar]

11147145
Ah, I thought that you were talking of Sweetie Belle Soul, Alicorn of the Void version. Yes, someone powerful enough and with enough control of the energies could do what you said to Sweetie Belle Soul, unicorn version, to weaken her and have an easier fight. After, they would still need to beat her up. Maybe Void could do it but he would still need to think about doing it and as great as he is, he isn't really the brightest fellow when it accounts to using his powers to fight.

And yes, Alicorn of the Void is still Sweetie Belle Soul. The difference is that before, it was while Sweetie Belle was just an unicorn, and now, it is the form of her Soul as an alicorn. So she will always take that second form from now on if she decides to unleash her Soul. Sooo you understand that this is something to avoid unless she wants to accidentally destroy some planets or even an universe or two.

[DockingWater17]

11147421
Could Stella Knight?

[Lucar]

11147661
He could, after learning how to do it.

[redsopine]

11157151
Then your walking the very thin line of turning into the very things you have been fighting

[redsopine]

11158277
True but he’s not dumb enough to pick a fight with sweetie she would kill him with cuteness being him back and kill him again in a fight making Shenron faceclaw at roshi’s antics while Goku would die from the cuteness wake up get beaten up then chill with sweetie start a rivalry and then she somehow blows up freeza by accident and goes Oops

[Lucar]

11158282

while Goku would die from the cuteness

From what I remember, Goku is as impervious to cuteness as Voldemort is impervious to love so Sweetie Belle will have to think again about using her most dreaded weapon.

[redsopine]

11158292
Post goblet of fire or philosopher stone Voldemort?

[Lucar]

11158294
Both?

[redsopine]

11159038
They was play nice or have sweetie be serious then play nice they choice option A so they don’t get beat up

[redsopine]

11159116
True though sheesh are we sure she’s not becoming a villain at this point or is she more anti hero with a sadistic side

[Lucar]

11159158
Well, against skull creatures, she has obviously no scruples. Mindless evil monsters don't really count as actual people.

[DockingWater17]

Do you plan on doing anything for Forgotten Land?

[redsopine]

11159180
True and makes u think if the dark gods a idiot as well making dumb bad guys with dumb minions

[Lucar]

11159279
I don't know yet.
11159281
Well, as long as they caused a max of negative stuff, I guess that the Dark God didn't mind if his minions were dumb or not.

[redsopine]

11159317
No probs man also hehe land of cookies and cake that’s just being mega mean to sunbutt and pinkie

[redsopine]

11162654
Anime that has the protagonist unknowingly shoving a large metal rod up a female dragons butt who happens to be Dragonborn and thus has a human form and can talk

[Lucar]

11163039
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I see...

[redsopine]

11163173
Ouch is a understatement trust me you don’t wanna see the scene without feeling weird

[redsopine]

11164213
Why does that put a smile on my face along with the idea of the chief’s all arguing who’s the boss only to clunked on the head by the waddle Dees ladle before he gives out orders and stations for them

[redsopine]

11164214
True but spikezilla deserves his time to rampage shine and why just why do I wish there’s was one scene with spikezilla or spikey chasing bandanna Dee around the castle trying to chomp his butt much to everyone’s amusement

[redsopine]

11164223
Imaging slayer armour encased in space marine armour inside a mech piloted by sweetie and the entire powers of chaos and tryynids and the dark gods and the entire army goes nope nope nope I don’t wanna die

[redsopine]

11167986
Suddenly broom sunglasses starts walking away whistling while trying to look nonchalant

[Lucar]

11168007
Actually, the culprit is Knuckle Joe.

[redsopine]

11168066
And who do you think convinced knuckle joe to show him

[Lucar]

11168089
Nobody. He just loves to watch fighting sports.

[redsopine]

11168093
AB’s works more effectively

[redsopine]

11168095
Grumbles as you used logic to thwart my attempt to get broom sunglasses yeeted to the moon

[redsopine]

11178587
True but the goal was to not kill just subdue so wouldn’t that mean she was disqualified?