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The Cloptimist


do not mistake peace for quiet

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...The (prequel) stories about what happened with Cadance and Twilight do exist as RP chatlogs... I'm just polishing them up!

9443523
Thanks! I've never written one of these before, but, well, why not

we need a prequel :pinkiecrazy:

9443649
There is! It's in the process of being turned from RP logs to an actual story, this one was just the easiest one to "convert" but I'll try and get it up ASAP.

(...It doesn't make this one make MUCH more sense, mind you, but hey)

9443649
Hell yeah we do! With two chapters one with Twilight and a second explaining how Cadance wound up in the picture.

9443878
The Cadance one actually comes first, story wise!

"Proof of Concept" (aka The Cadance Story)

The characters aren't anthro in it, for reasons I forget, but it's essentially the first part of the trilogy, with Twilight's middle bit still to come.

"...I need to be sure that you're... good enough for her, Anon. And more importantly... I need to be sure that she won't be hurt."

Another glow of magic, this time forming some kind of... rod? Or a switch, maybe a crop...?

"...Hurt by some selfish stallion, who wants to take more than she's willing to give."

She proceeds to help him cheat on his girlfriend.

"Tell me, Anon," she says, and there's a flash, as her magic conjures something else up next to her, but you can't turn your head to see it. "Tell me, what will you do, if another mare besides Twilight tries to make you cum?"

"Tell me, right now."

You don't... oh fuck... you don't know... what she wants to... shit!... hear... oh that feels OH FUCK... so... you say... the first thing... NGHHHH you're so fucking CLOSE... you can think of...

"I... ask... Twilight... first!"

The vibrator stops, and Celestia looks at you for a moment.

And then she smiles.

"Good boy,"

She then proceeds to make him cum with no consent from Twilight whatsoever.

Yeah lady, no one is buying it. You heard about a guy who could satisfy two princesses and you wanted a bit of a taste so you rationalized an excuse so you wouldn't feel like the bad guy. Thats all. :trollestia:

But all that aside, this was a hot read. Looking forward to the prequel.

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"Oh, and Anon?", comes Celestia's chirpy sing-song voice from behind the door. "Twilight and I share rather more than stories. So, if you ever find yourself wanting to repeat this experience, and Twilight is OK with it, well..."

She leans back around the door, naked, sweaty shoulders dusted in baby powder.

"...I certainly wouldn't say no."

Round two, fight fap!

Sequel?

9447723
Maybe! I was worried there weren't many more places to take the story, I didn't want to risk it getting too samey, but if I have a good idea, perhaps... There are two prequels though!

9447743
Already seen the one with Twilight, that was adorasexy. As for the one with Cadence... I'll give it a chance, but I'm not a fan of feral clop. Have you thought about changing it to anthro?

9447756
I thought about it, but it was a bit too much hassle to rewrite the basic structure (the person who was "directing" it changed their mind after that first one to move to anthro instead!)... and this way, although it's a bit confusing, people who *do* like the feral stuff can join in the fun too, I guess.

Thanks for the kind words about the Twilight one. I don't understand why it's doing poorly on the votes compared to the others (especially since it's got the most favourites of anything I've written in my, uh, extensive three day clop-writing career), but I'm quite pleased with it nonetheless.

9447790
I dunno, maybe it has to do with the image the fans have of her. Maybe they don't see her character fit with this kind of situation: Cadence is the princess of love, which to many people equal to the princess of passion/sex, so it's easy to see her do this kind of stuff, while Celestia had literally centuries to explore her sexuality, so she fits a lot of roles (motherly lover, dominant type, mare of power with a secret passion for being dominated, ...). If we exclude the fact that she's a waifu (and this alone sinks a lot of shippings, even with a 2nd person protagonist apparently). the fact that her character has been explored in these years may make difficult to accept her acting in certain ways.

Or maybe I'm looking too deeply in it and it's just a matter of preferences ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

9447839
Thank you for the considered reply! That makes a lot of sense. Like I say, I was pretty happy with it, anyway! And a lot of people seem to have added it to their favourites, more so even than this one, so it can't be all bad.

9447840
Don't worry too much about the rating, people often add a story to their libraries without clicking the like button (I know it from direct experience, the number of bookshelves with my main story is easily 4 times the number of its likes :ajbemused:)

I wouldn't say no to a sequel of this story! Twilight may be my #1, but Celestia is one of my favorites as well.

9467120
It does strike me that there are two more places to go... I intended for the reader to either think Celestia was being a hypocrite saying she was doing this for Twilight's sake while clearly getting off on it herself without bothering to get the go-ahead she demands Anon always seek, or that, like, Cadance, she'd actually gotten Twilight's permission to do this off screen, and worked in the lesson out of concern. Either way could maybe lead to a decent sequel.

The other thing is that there's still another adult Princess who hasn't taken part in the madness yet before Anon collects the full set...

(Oh, and, thank you!)

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