Cause and Effect

MTest Drive
MLP: FiM
Porn
Princess Celestia thinks it's time she "test drives" Twilight's anon coltfriend.
Sex
Fetish
Second Person
Anthro
Celestia
OC
The Cloptimist · 4.6k words · 60 10 · 2.7k views

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The Cloptimist

The Cloptimist #1 · Feb 8th, 2019 · · ·

The middle part of what I guess you could call the latex trilogy. This is my favourite of the three, for what it's worth, even though its RP roots still show through quite a bit.

Bouncer

Bouncer #2 · Feb 8th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Love the story and the series, man! Femdom has always been a big fetish of mine and it's really neat to see that and my favorite book horse in one story!

The Cloptimist

The Cloptimist #3 · Feb 8th, 2019 · · ·

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Aw, thank you! I'm brand new to this, so any kind words are much appreciated, I'm glad you liked it!

This one seems to be doing much less well, votes-wise, than the other two (Celestia and Cadance), even though it's had more favourites (?!), but it's my favourite of them - like you, I warmed to the idea of Twilight's awkward first attempts at femdom, and I really enjoyed doing the dialogue at the end!

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #4 · Feb 12th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Are you going to make this kind of story for all of the princessess? (this includes Nightmare Moon)

The Cloptimist

The Cloptimist #5 · Feb 12th, 2019 · · ·

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I'm not sure! Or, let me rephrase that, I do have story ideas for both Nightmare Moon and (separately) the reformed but still somewhat insecure Luna, but they aren't part of this ongoing second-person latex saga. (I worry they would start to get a bit samey if Anon here went through basically the same experience again with any more royalty!) But, I mean, if people want more of (gestures around) this, then for sure, I definitely had fun writing them.

(My favourite bits of this to write were the parts after Anon has blown his load and Twilight reverts straight back to character - I had a PM asking if the bit where she takes off her boots was meant to be a foot fetish thing, and while I do enjoy that, no, it wasn't, it was just meant to show how little she really cared about the latex mistress act versus just making Anon happy and then recording her findings. Anyway, I can well imagine that for Luna I'd enjoy writing that part just as much; I'd love to write a happy post-coital Luna scene, whereas with NMM I imagine the femdom stuff would be second nature and a lot less awkward.)

Krystal Clearskies

Krystal Clearskies #6 · Feb 21st, 2019 · 1 · ·

I don't get all the dislikes, you earned a thumbs up from me. Personally, i wish there were some bondage and things, but for being light BDSM, this was great.

The Cloptimist

The Cloptimist #7 · Feb 21st, 2019 · · ·

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Thank you :) Yes, the first two stories are a bit lighter than the third (Celestia) one, because here Twilight (and Cadance) are meant to be highly inexperienced, whereas Celestia has a better idea of what she's doing so there's a little bit more of the femdom in that one. Glad you liked it!

As for the downvotes, meh, whatever, I had a lot of fun writing it

Krystal Clearskies

Krystal Clearskies #8 · Feb 21st, 2019 · 1 · ·

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That's the important thing. Me personally, i don't do clop really. I have one clopfic that's insanely vanilla, and the rest of my stories are all E rated. I could do a saucier clopfic, but i dunno. Enjoying what you write is important. You're writing it for an audience, but you're writing it for you first and foremost!

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