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FoolAmongTheStars


Sorry for being a Starlight Glimmer apologist

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Sunburst and Sunset Shimmer are two siblings trying to survive in a kingdom run by a rotten queen, with every little coin they can gather from various odd jobs. But when the eldest sister tells an outlandish lie, she unknowingly puts her little brother in unspeakable danger, where he is assign to complete an impossible task or face terrible consequences. In his darkest hour, a nameless witch comes to him and offers to help him: for a kindness. Will he accepted it? Will he remember all that he has forgotten? Only the witch has the answer.


Based on the German fairytale "Rumpelstiltskin"

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

Ohh...I need to read more about this, you don’t see a lot of good Fairy Tale AUs these days...much less one with Sunburst as the protagonist...
I really want to see more!! :twilightsmile:
Ps. I can only thing of All Star by Smash Mouth while reading the title :p

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Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoying it, and don't worry, there's definitely more to come just hang on tight! :raritywink: Sunburst is really fun to write, such a shame not many people write about him, or maybe that's just me.
...now that you mentioned it, All Star is a fitting song for this story :rainbowlaugh:

Ohhh this is good
This is really, really good

This is amazing!!! I really like this story!!!
and also, love the little plot twist at the end :p

A great classic fable.

I’ve never seen/read Rumplestiltskin but I absolutely adored this!! Oh my goodness it had action, a lot of mystery and vague happenings, the sweetest romance ever, and colorful side characters. (my favorite was Chicken-cuddling Sugar Belle:derpytongue2:) Sunset’s character was such a fun one - I mean who couldn’t resist laughing at those hair brained lies she comes up with? But she was also very caring, and family oriented. I loved that too. Sunburst was adorably good natured and kind. Starlight’s character was such an enigma, and I loved figuring out the big mystery in the kingdom. This is definitely a joyride of a read, and it’s incredibly charming. (almost like watching an old Disney movie:twilightsmile:)
Amazing job, FoolAmongTheStars.👏❤️

The moment Flash's name was mentioned, Sunset bolted upright, scrambling so fast to get out of bed that she tripped over her own feet and landed on the floor face first. She dizzily slid the rest of her body onto the floor, and once she regained her senses, cast a small glare at her little brother.

It’s one of those days

This story is dope! Can’t say I know anything about the fairytale but I’m into this so far!

Is this just being overprotective or is Sunset having a brother complex? XD

Both mares stopped what they were doing, and although Sunset couldn't hear this conversation, she felt a sudden urge to sit up in bed.

Brother complex activate

Great read. Enjoyed. :twilightsmile:

buts he knew the most important ones—the spells that would change a person

Did you mean to say “but SHE knew”?

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