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King Ice


Twidash is Love. Twidash is Life

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Rainbow and Starlight are arguing, but they will soon understand the meaning of friendship. There might be a death or two for that though. Twilight will once again use the magic of friendship, like her mentor taught her and like she learned with all of her friends.

Characters will be OOC but only to make the story more humorous.

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Comments ( 8 )

If you know there are so many issues, why didn't you proofread it yourself?

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If I made that means I didn't know how no to make them in the first place. I know I have punctuation problems, but I'm still not good at correcting them. I know I said they were issues, but I'm not even sure of that, since I'm pessimistic I'm just thinking there are some, maybe not many though.

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Reference texts exist. Free lessons exist. Free programs to help you check exist.

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I know and I said I'm making improvements, I have proofreaders for some of my stories that are helping me. No need to react like that. It's like I attacked you or something.

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Yes, it may seem weird but I was trying to write surreal humour because I think it's hilarious, don't know if I succeeded though.

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And is that a good or a bad point:pinkiecrazy:?

That was a good read xD

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