Was really glad to see it updated. Can't wait to see what the future chapters will bring.

Can this be a regular update

Please

More please

A great chapter, happy too see that niether you or your story is dead. Hopefully chapters will come out faster.

If You rip those stiches out, I'll gut you and feed you to my bear!
and no he isn't a Gecko
What's insurance got to do with lizards?
Sorry no MidiFix here...

mmmmmm A bald monkey .... A hooman ?

Really happy to see more of this,. I’m curious if he is from the mirror world, as in it really is our earth, and it’s not just some other earth just humanoid ponies.

More pls

All he needs is a pencil and some creativity.

Btw, I haven't read your fic yet but it sounds really promising.

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WITH A FOHKIN' PENCIL!

WHO THE FOHK CAN DO THAT?!?!

Lunch was equally sacred, as it was Twilight’s break from the mountains of paperwork she found herself buried under everyday as a princess.

So when Fluttershy all but broke down the doors to the dining room, Twilight nearly choked on the daisy sandwich she was in the process of eating for lunch, only by the grace of Celestia herself did she manage to get it into the right place down into her stomach instead of her windpipe.

Bit of a nitpick but you already made it clear she was eating lunch, reiterating it in the next paragraph was a little redundant.

"Of course." Fluttershy said

Another nitpick, but every single statement of dialogue ending in a period should be followed by a comma. It should read more like this:
"Of course," Fluttershy said.

He took a moment to reload his weapon as he listened to the footsteps draw closer to him.

I only counted 10 shots. What kind of pistol is it? My Glock holds 13. I usually keep 1 round chambered and 12 in the magazine. Some pistols are different, so I'm curious.

There must be something wrong with my vision. My occipital lobe might have been damaged after I hit the ground. John thought as he moved to get up off the couch.

Again, the commas need to be there after ground like this:
There must be something wrong with my vision. My occipital lobe might have been damaged after I hit the ground, John thought as he moved to get up off the couch.

Good stuff so far, keep it up. Hope this helps!

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All valid points.

In regards to him reloading after ten shots: Did I state during that scene that he had a full magazine when he went up/left the elevator?

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You didn't, I guess that can be left up for debate. Fair point.

You need to make the chapters longer

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1,800 to 2,000 words is gonna be the average. I am not great at writing super long chapters.

So far I love love the story it is a perfect story I love what you are doing with the story I am liking this story and following it aswell I can't wait to see the next chapter of this story and I am not saying rush yourself take your time with your story and make it a good story

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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I work on the story whenever I have a break from work and some other RL stuff.

You've done something rather impossible.

You brought me out of retirement. I quit reading MLP fics, but now, I feel like I can return to reading stories on this site.

And I just watched this movie (the first one in the series) today.

Hope you can get going with that next chapter, please. I'm tracking down this fic.

It’s been months. My weeny hurts. Why must I wait so long!?

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I’m working on the next chapter slowly. Things in my life have been hectic lately.

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Be a man of focus, commitment, and sheer will. You will power through all your problems and issues, guaranteed. And us, your devoted readers, will be greatly rewarded.

Amma enjoy this.

Please keep going. I wonder what will happen next and how the ponies will react to John Wick's back story.

Quick question. What was John's childhood like. It was very vague in the movies.

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Some comics go into detail. I won't explore his childhood in this story.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Man, I was hoping to find something like this . Well, I was more wondering if someone would write a fic with John Wick really. I like the movies too. Didn't realize it was a comic book though .

In any case, I hope you get to continue this story. It's really good and want to see how you play it out .

Alright, cool, just don't let him near a pencil.

good story i hope it gets updated more

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i can agree

Update please 🥺

Please update this?🥺

I hope this story gets updated soon?

Moar Please!

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Need more

When are you going to make another chapter buddy, we’re all starting to like this story and are waiting for a chapter 3.

When will there be a chapter 3? Is this story dead?

Where’s the next chapter?

could be.

Is this story dead?

It's cool, of course, that you decided to Write that such an Awesome Character as John Wick Got into Equestria, but it would be better if you made it so that he was originally somehow Part of Equestria or By Moving he became a Pony (Unicorn or Alicorn) since, well, he remained a human being and then he will not be able to Interact with a Pony, For example, how will he Fall in Love with someone, For example, a Sparkle when he is a human and she is an Alicorn? This is Bestiality!!!

Is this story dead?