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Crimson Prose


I've got Shining Armor tied up in my basement for molestation purposes.

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9224352
Weird, seems to work for me still. Try searching Derpibooru for artist:ri2k,limestone pie if the number doesn't work for you.

Needs to have real rape!
Nah its still hot

nice story of incest impregnation :)

I feel like it is not going to be the last chapter. (I am hoping it continues!)

I gotta say, this is some messed up shit. What kind of monster would not show Marble getting impregnated too. You sick fuck.

I really liked it! While the play-rape is fun, the loving relationship within the Pie household is even better so I'm glad that's where the story ended up. While I know it is a daunting task, in a perfect world I'd like to see this continue not just to Marble, but a chapter for Maud and Pinkie too. All the pie sisters have such wildly different personalities that it'd be great to see how each reacts to the incoming reality of carrying their father's foal.

father down and ride him. Her purred, getting a better look

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Damn. This was amazing.
I can imagine incest play among the pie family for some reason, especially in this case.
Great work.

Tsunderes... my one weakness...

You sick, deplorable fuck.

Only one chapter!?

9278073
I'm considering a second! But I'd have to think of a good way to do it since just having him knock up each Pie in turn might seem repetitive.

9282554
Well you may already have an answer. In this story, you point out that Lime and Marble have their own personal, if somewhat similar, kinks. Why not just add a bit more spotlight to those along with the other? If you add Maud and Pinkie, you could give them each a unique one as well. draw out their personality quirks even as they share the overall impreg.

Just a thought.

PLEASE we need more!! I haven’t cummed so hard from a story in a long time! Bravo!

This was really good. Please let there be a sequel with Marble Pie.

Wow It is very good. Very interesting story. I especially liked the moment with the camera in the hooves of Cloudy. Ah, it would be great to see more stories like this. It would be interesting to see Marble Pie's reaction to possible insemination and capturing this process on a video camera. Oh, and I think it would be great to add an anatomically correct breeding process. Since we are dealing with ponies, swelling of the penis, raising the tail and other delights is also worth adding. It would be great. (These are not instructions, just the wishes of the sick bastard. Nothing more.)

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Maybe I will start adding a bit more horsie-realism. As for this story, I put thought into having each of the Pie sisters have a go, each one with a different favorite kink. I'd probably make Marble super-submissive, Pinkie with food fetish, and maybe Maud cucking her boyfriend by getting knocked up by her dad in front of him.
But alas, I have more ideas than I have motivation usually. Still working on that.

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