Papers, Ponies, and Attitude

by Yellowtail

CHOOptah tenEIGht: Some REAL shizzle!

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Hm? What do you mean lunch break ended?... WHEN!?!? Oh shit! Uh, yes, so, um... Fuck it. Twilight did stupid shit, Anon yells at her, other people stupid shit, and Anon yells at them. Then, uh, Anon goes off and climbs a mountain! Yeah, and gets the, um bread! Because, y'know, hella bread!.... Please don't revoke my Narrator's lice-

Author's Note:

April Fools!
I know this is shit, but I literally just remembered it was April Fools

Comments

[kitkataddel]

Cue comments of endless fullstops/periods/dots............................................................
'Cos lets be honest, that's probably what's going to happen.

[J-90]

EPIC CHAPTER!!!
Well made for this specific day

[Illi]

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hah. thought something interesting would be under here? April fools!

[Lerris]

My braille translator caught on fire.

[Joural]

Eh. A proper april fools chapter should be more in the direction of non-canon twists, not just dots IMO. 'This udated oh no it didn't' isn't much of a prank. 'This updated! Wow this is an unexpected direction, wait why is it the lyrics to a song?' Is much more effective, IMO

[Umbra Animo]

9541341
Yeah and could actually be you know funny. God damn i hate today its soooo over done it just killed the site for today

[MrUrsa]

....well played

[Thundoryey]

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I mean... I suppose.

[No0one]

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[vortex123]

In all honesty, while this was great, it would have been much better if we couldn't see the word count before clicking on the page

[KnightMysterio]

XD

[changeling khaos]

[ARKLIGHT SNIPERSHY]

10 out of 10.....
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[TerribleSpeller]

So Good.
So good.
10/10 would read again.

[The Faceless Maker]

Go away, I'm on my period.
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[WorkNLurk]

Whoa... Gotta change the rating to M bro, that scene near the middle was WAY too much for just a T rating. Jesus, give a warning next time...

[Rainwalker12]

Yooo that was way too gory! I enjoyed it tho lol

[Yellowtail]

9541598
Yeeeaaaah, maybe I got a little carried away with the content

[Drazhan]

God dammit. How do I read braille on a computer screen? Oh well, least it's easier than trying to teach Twilight to dance.

[kitsunedagger432]

I'm crying from the sheer emotion he put into this chapter

[Raccoon Writer]

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This part legit had me in tears, never seen someone write so emotionally

[Vaguely Demented]

12 words of great import I see.

[ANBRAN]

This is some seriously good shit.

[Silas5399]

I am not amused

[Kek lel]

April fools with a side of depresso. Why you do this?

[amiamera]

12 word chapter not being real. Who would have guessed!?!?

[Vailen]

Well, that was a very in depth chapter if every I read one. It all makes sense now. You sir are a genius.

[Kage no Brony]

A better love story than Twilight!

Admittedly, not that hard to do, but impressive you achieved that with only ellipses.

[IZ_LINKS]

I didn’t think u were serious, you heartless shmuck...

[The oracle]

The humor was excellent this chapter

[rockfire8]

I have two things to say.
1- Well played.
2- Oof.

[A lost anonymous]

*while scrolling down the chapter*
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...........

[Masterbeef117]

Motherfucka *tiny violin plays*

[AZUR3]

You're right that was shit.

I love it and will hold my enthusiasm.

[J-TBone]

[Thestral Music]

Here I am remembering the founding of the RAF, and everyone's just cracking jokes

[Shadowblade019]

I hate you

[Eternal Pain]

Oh for the love of WHYYYYYY

[wildfire mind]

it's the 2nd for me

[Billy123]

My reaction to this chapter https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UQK5VcP72VA

[flufpufhuf]

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Done
Day late but April fools!

[Yellowtail]

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Do you see your name?
I want you to earn it. Thus, I made this chapter.

[Gyro Pony]

And I thought Anon was the asshole character.

[Yellowtail]

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What a twist!

[Eternal Pain]

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And you succeeded. : )

[SWEETOLEBOB18]

"Your story was both good and original.
Unfortunately, the parts that were good were not original and the parts that were original were not good"
George Bernard Shaw

Your vocabulary is mean & impoverished but adequate to express your ideas
Still, good character development

[The_Poket_Umbreon]

A' fucka you!

[paladinwolf]

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[Yellowtail]

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Never gonna let you down

[Makerofthebuttswagger]

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Fuckin' ouch.