• Member Since 24th Apr, 2012
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Wise Cracker


Just some guy, riding out his time.

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Rainbow Dash tries bravely to star in a clopfic but cannot stop the author from writing a comedy instead!

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After a little under a year in Development Hell, fans were shocked to find a TwiDash fic that actually made erotic mind control look ridiculous.

*ahem* Yeah, I took some, err 'liberties' with the original idea. Glad you liked it, at least.

You... did like it, right? :twilightoops:

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Well I do wish you'd write more like Rainbow Dash Discovers Erotic Mind Control...

But I did enjoy this for its comedic value. Probably the best I've seen the premise of the hypnotized being too literal.

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Yeah, I can understand that, on both counts. I'm veering towards lighter stuff now, but nothing seems to be much of a hit, so... still wondering how to handle that. Besides which, there's a lot of factors at play for the Rainbow Dash Discovers kind of writing drying up as it has. I think I might skip pony writing for a while and do the Niko thing I'd planned before getting back to all the sequels I promised ages ago :pinkiecrazy:

And hey, somebody had to write a funny about this concept, might as well be a strange Cracker :rainbowlaugh:

This was amusing.

I do have an idea for an E/T rated sequel, if you'd be willing to read the idea.

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I'm up for brainstorming, but I'm not writing requests anytime soon, sorry. I've got a lot on my plate right now, pony and non-pony.

Glad you liked it, at any rate :raritywink:

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Well, I'll send it your way, and hope that something eventually comes of it.
I hope that's fine.

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No problem, but don't get your hopes up. I mean, this one took about year since you suggested it, and things have only gotten worse, honestly, especially recently, so...

She did say clean her like Fluttershy.

Now I can't stop laughing about the flea wash

"Flea wash."

Hey, look, an upvote appeared and I have no idea why!

"Then get to it. Lick me like your favourite ice cream."

You're not even trying to hide what comes next. Chompy chompy!

"Second, you're not going to treat me like an idiot again. Next time something happens, you're going to listen when I say it's not my fault." Rainbow quickly realised this suggestion needed to be more specific. "And the next time after that. And the one after that. Actually, any time something bad happens with me involved, you're going to at least give me the benefit of the doubt."

If you don't want to be treated like an idiot, maybe don't act like one :facehoof:
Good story.

"Second, you're not going to treat me like an idiot again. Next time something happens, you're going to listen when I say it's not my fault." Rainbow quickly realised this suggestion needed to be more specific. "And the next time after that. And the one after that. Actually, any time something bad happens with me involved, you're going to at least give me the benefit of the doubt."

I mean it literally was your fault though? Not really a criticism given I doubt we're supposed to agree with her given the rape and all..

Still pretty funny story. :ajsmug:

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