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BSting
Bees are misunderstood creatures.
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This was definitely amusing, though the ending sours it slightly due to it not being quite as happy as the rest of the fic.
I already have a bit of an idea for a sequel involving Trixie a bit more, since I feel like Dash would like to get back at her a bit, and thinking that the help with learning hypnosis herself wouldn't be quite enough.
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Ah, sorry. I think I was trying too hard to be amusing. Then again, how would you react if you woke up to find your ass stung by a ton of wasps? XD
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I was actually talking about the scene with Fluttershy
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Oh dear. Yes, let me edit that out, then.
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Done. That scene is gone now or, at least, something more fitting.
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All right.
I'll send you my potential idea for the sequel at some point tomorrow.
I assume the new version of the Fluttershy scene was added in so it could lead into my sequel idea a bit
Is that correct?
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No. I just wanted to end on something more light-hearted. This is more coincidental than anything else.
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I see
Why didn't the attack pheromone work for Rainbow Dash?
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I imagine that the 2 other ponies were already covered in the stuff before Rainbow got close.
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It would have been justice if she got just as stung as Rarity and Applejack.
This story is pretty silly and amusing, and I liked reading all of it. Funny thing is, even though I'm absolutely terrified of bees and wasps, I still enjoy these stories.
I think it's mostly the way you write the characters, and how they sometimes say things I can totally hear them saying in my head. Also, I personally really like the part where AJ and Rarity taunt the yellow jackets by shaking their rumps at them, as silly as it may sound.
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See, this is what I'm talking about. Why aren't people more like you, where they understand the fact that there is no malice behind it and it's for cartoonish fun? The fact that you are afraid of stinging insects, yet enjoy this is an accomplishment for me. Unfortunately, no matter where I go, comments like these are few and very far between... 😞
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Oh, thank you!
I agree with you fully, some people are really quick to put something down without even taking a moment to try and think about why someone may like it. Even if I won't be able to enjoy this particular kink, I'll at least be somewhat able understand why the people who may have it, like it.
It's a very funny story. I wonder if Applejack and Rarity will have a wasp sting fetish after this hypnosis?