• Member Since 23rd Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 9th, 2023

BSting


Bees are misunderstood creatures.

T
Source

Luna has a secret. She's hiding in her room a new invention that is able to play video games! However, during one of her gaming sessions a wasp flies into her room and heckles her to seemingly no end.

Warning: Butt pain is the main source of slapstick in this story. Caused by stings. Lots of stings.

Edit: Please don't just rate it down and leave. Tell me why you did. I want to be a better writer and improve.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

8893634

Indeed! Moral of the story: Learn to share. XD

*Rates the story down and leaves*

LOL, great story so far, I've read a quarter of this randomness! ;)

"Luna was too tired to lift her head up and realize her horn was aiming for the backside of her sister, Celestia."

- That got random fast; that was barely the second paragraph! XD

8894182

Thanks!

Yeah, sorry, I know that sounds very selfish of me to ask that from people, but I want to learn what the opinions of my readers are.

Теперь логичным было бы написать про Селестию. :)

PS: Хотя... Как то нехорошо получается с моей стороны.
Селестия моя любимая пони, а я предлагаю, чтобы её оса укусила. :(

8902429

Использование Google Translate

Селестию не нужно утомлять. Она верна в своем уроке. Тем не менее, она будет продолжать играть в игры Луны, пока она склоняется к ее укусам.

Comment posted by annonymus deleted Nov 8th, 2018
Login or register to comment