Little Filly...

This story is a sequel to One Last Song

On Mother's Day , those mares who are mothers' tend to enjoy being pampered by their foals or significant others. However...sometimes a Mother can't escape the knowledge that...their little one can't celebrate with her.

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Whinifree

Whinifree #1 · May 13th, 2018 · 2 · ·

This makes me remember that this is the first Mother’s Day where my mom is without her mom. My grandma passed away in Fall of last year.

Phoenix Heart 27

Phoenix Heart 27 #2 · May 13th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Aww. Well I'm sorry for your loss. I do hope that my story provokes happy memories of her.

Whinifree

Whinifree #3 · May 13th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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It did.

Phoenix Heart 27

Phoenix Heart 27 #4 · May 13th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Most excellent!❤💚

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #5 · May 15th, 2018 · 1 · 4 ·

And up until you brought god into this, I was going to upvote the story. Honestly, rewritten as everything after as not explained at all, and it would be fine.

Phoenix Heart 27

Phoenix Heart 27 #6 · May 15th, 2018 · 2 · ·

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Fair enough as that's your opinion. That is simply the direction I wanted this to go in. Also, to note, I said:"Whatever god was listening". While that does iterate to religeon, I however never state which one. Hell, it could've been some mystical god-like being in the MLP world for all I cared.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #7 · Jul 30th, 2018 · 1 · ·

“I love you too mama. But you and dad have got to be strong now. Just because I’m gone from Equus, doesn’t mean I’m gone forever. You’ll see me again soon . So long as you hold me in your heart, I’ll always be there mama.”, Serenity replied, her eyes filled with tears as she was held by her mama. A tender hoof stroking her long brown mane lovingly.