This story is a sequel to Melody Star's Sonata
Starlight Sonata is a very gifted filly. Ever since she was a foal, she was always making some form of “music”. Her parents and older sister help her in every way they can to make sure she achieves greatness. Though....not always are things what they seem. Join them as they deal with certain trials and tribulations in order to reach greatness.
I remember, I used to use this picture as my oc's cutie mark back in 2012. Didn't think I'd be seeing it again.
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Oddly enough I found it on Google and decided that this does in fact fit with both the main character and the story itself.
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I'm sure it's in a better place than it started now. My old OC was a black and white alicorn Prince of Music. Not a lot of creativity in the design. Pretty generic "Gary Stu" OC you'd see around then.
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I can imagine. Whereas this well...it will now be used for a young, deaf Pegasus filly.
No...SHE'S DEAF?!?!?!
Looks like she wants to learn music.... Even if she can't really hear it.
Looks like she really does want to be a musician.
Well done Sonata!
Big sister's so proud of you too!
You sure did!
Oh she is so going to be experiencing that when she's older!!!
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I expected this response.
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indeed you did, and you got it!
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Yeppers!
Poor Sonata.... So left out....
Indeed.
Yeah, probably!
I wish you the best of luck Sonata!
Sounds good to me.
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Yes. A good lunch always puts one in a good mood.
Jeez Sonata, take it easy!
Wise words from a wise pony.
Ouch!
Well...things got awkward really fast.
I can see these two will be getting along just fine.
Or you're gonna end up really clumsy!!!
Uh-oh...dont push her Melody, she just might pull that ace up her sleeve!!!
Don't tempt her.
Speaking of....
No one can resist that look! Also, Sonata is rocking it!
That's what I wonder to....
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That it does. Even if we tend to over do it a bit...I know I do.
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Well...have you ever heard it be said that if you lose one sense, the others get heightened?
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Mmmhmmm
Uh-oh, Sonata is PISSED!!!
Sonata calm down!!!
Well, this must've been a change in that....
I don't see how anyone can miss something like that.
Whoa, that was way too close.
Always keep that bag with you Starry.
Oh jeez...that really is important.
Hurry!
Ponified versions of hot dogs, nice!
Now that was a beautiful lullaby.
Sweet dreams.
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Well...yeah, that happened to me on more than one occasion.
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Indeed. Their reactions and how they dealt with situations really reflect on true sibling relationships. As it is that Melody Star is a whole 8 years older than Starlight Sonata, it's expected that both have very different ways in communication and entertainment. Arguments happen and that's ok. When you're older/younger sibling is there to help you out of a tricky situation, then your grateful.
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Wait, really?
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Indeed.
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Yes. As someone who is the youngest sister of 2 (there's 3 of us on Mama's side) and the 2nd oldest sister out of 6 (there's 10 of us on my Dad's side...9 biological), I know how it is on both spectrums.
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Mhm, I don't really wanna go into too much detail, but...one day, while I was at a conventional meeting for an Economics Project, when I first went to the speaker, I kid you not, I felt like my heart was about to explode out of my chest. I immediately started sweating and I could feel by heart beating right in my ears! My legs were shaking a little and I had some time trying to get my words out when I was trying to explain just why I was there, and what I needed my report on. It took me more than a few moments to calm down, cause I could feel my pulse quickening, and be able to talk, but my words barely managed to come out as more of a stutter. Oh, and it didn't help that a couple of police officers were there, especially because of a little misinterpreted run in I had with them last year.
Yeah...not a good time to be looking like you're going to have a panic attack, let alone sweating up a storm like a Warthog wallowing in a pile of mud. While I'm pretty sure no one smelled me...I took quite a thorough shower when I got home.
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Whoa whoa whoa whoa WHOA, back up!!! You have THAT many sisters?!?!
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I completely emphasize with that situation
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My apologies, I fear that I didn't make it clear. I'm the youngest on my mother's side (I have an older sister and brother) and I'm the 4th oldest on my father's side (the triplets [g/b/b] and I are technically the same age as we were all born in 97...just 8 months apart. I have a 20 year old sister, an 18 year old sister, a 14 year old brother, a 12 year old brother, a 6 year old sister and a almost 1 year old baby sister).
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So glad I'm not the only one. *hugs*
Oh, I see...that makes much more sense. Thanks for straightening that out.
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No worries.
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Sounds like a plan.
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A race eh? RD approves!!!
Wait...is she getting a dog?!?!?!
IT'S A DOG!!!
Always good to have Man's, or rather, Mare's Best Friend with you!
The bond between mare and animal!!! FEEEEEELS!!!
Always gotta try something new right?
Good luck Sonata!
Now that was beautiful!!!
!!!
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Okay. Yes she got a dog, but (and I emphasize that word so much) it is in fact a service dog for the deaf/hard of hearing. Second: Of course the feels. That was the idea for this chapter!
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And you did it quite nicely.
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Admittedly it wasn't quite easy. I had to do my research on how exactly service dogs help the dead/hard of hearing and it took me a lifetime to find the right compositions for this chapter (btw: I dunno if you're familiar with either of those songs).
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Yeah, I bet that had to be a pain...I'm currently in the process of doing my own research for giving my characters techniques from two of the purple tags in my story, and creating their bios. As for the songs, no, I haven't really heard them before, but by Faust were they beautiful.
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Yes, but that's the idea. If you want accurate or semi-accurate portrayals in a fanfiction, then ya gotta do ya research!
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Indeed; I had just done a bio of one of my soon-to-be-introduced characters a couple days ago, (Milky Way), and boy oh boy, was that hectic!
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Oh I bet.
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Indeed, the most difficult part for me was doing our favorite milkmare's backstory and her, uh...condition as to why she's so...well developed. While the latter was a lot more easier, the former...well...you already know.
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Yeah.
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By the way, in case you wanted to see the bio of Milky Way, you can find it here in MLP/Dragon Ball Z/Fairy Tail Bios.
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I'll take a look.
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Cool. Theres no rush; take as much time as you need.
Heh, little filly loves to dance huh?
Oh crud, sorry Melly.
Little too fast Misty.
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Whoopsie!
What a beautiful symphony of music. No pun intended!
Yeah, may want to get her hammock she can nestle comfortably in. I've seen a clip where an American Black Bear tried to sit on a hammock...it was quite a laugh!
Good idea, I think that type of hammock will work out just fine.
Ah, the tender loving moments!
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All of that was absolutely necessary (also, just reading over what you quoted, I noticed I had some typos that my editor must've missed. Will have to go back over those).
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Oh, well, I'm glad I was able to help point that out.
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However unintentionally it was, you did.
And I bet she'll love it.
Uh-oh....
Asking what?
Wait, Moon doesn't want Melody to go?!
Well, on one hand Moondance does want her daughter to go to college, but on the other...Melody does want to follow her dream.
Mean what?
N-now now, just try to clam down Melody!
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...ooooooooooooooooh CRAP!!! And now shit has ultimately hit the fan!!!
Wait, jam???
I bet they'd rather not.
Well, at least there's someone to look out for them.
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Always save the best for last.
Happy birthday Sprinkler!!!
Melody, I understand your anger but good god that was over the top!!!
Shit, Melody, run!!!
I think it's best if you two go take some time to cool off....
Not gonna like, this really made my heart ache.
Both of those sound pretty bad to be honest.... Though the latter sounds a lot more, well, bearable if you know what I mean.
Ooooooooh, looks like things are getting good.
Crystal!
SHIIIIIIIP!!!
Is that so?
Why wouldn't it be? She said it right in front of you all!
Sweet dreams, my sweet little fillies.
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Okay, All of your response is accurately accepted.
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Precisely.
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Yes. Now as this is the longest chapter of this particular story, hopefully you won't mind answering this simple question:
What specifically did you like about this story?
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I like how, despite the fact that Starlight is deaf, she doesn't let that stop her from following her dreams of finding who she is and what she's mean to do in life, and even though she's lost some loved ones in the past, she still has friends and family to help her pull through,
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Most excellent.
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Eeyup.