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hmmm. i actually thought this story was completed. was i thinking of another story, perhaps?
This story will probably put Fleur higher up in my 'favorite ponies' list
RACISM!
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Possibly C'est La Vie?
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Similar premise. Human falls in love with Fleur.
Nicely done. Very interested in Fleur's next move.
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Definitely not done for this one. Hopefully not for a while yet, because this is going well.
I do so enjoy longer romance fics, after all.
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no, cuz i think this one had the lewd scene in chapter ten. and photo finished was there being a creep. but either im going mad, or the author changed it
Outstanding, as usual. This chapter made my night.
Thank the fluffy heavens he's finally getting out of that -hole apartment!
i have a feeling the next 4 or 5 chapters are going to be super fun.
le woot, we shall prepare camping gear for the next story. for now, we PARTY FOR NEW CHAPTER
Can't wait for Fleur to finally crack some pony heads or bust shit up.
Uh, oh. Somepony has invoked Fury de Fleur... evacuate the city!
Damn, he's got it made. My place can't afford to spring for mice.
Thanks for the update
I hope there is another chapter soon!
I am so excited for the next chapter!!
Ha! Nice.~
-Ru
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I highly recommend https://www.fimfiction.net/story/205678/the-models-secretary
I'd recommend it more if it hadn't been hiatused for years, but what can you do?
Oooooh I cant wait to see these snobby nobles get a real talking to
Even when the guys are the "girls" we still can't win an argument against one can we?
Also loved the chapter.
Thumbs up.
......Why do I get this sudden since of deja vu? They arn't gonna happen to carry a Couch all the way back to her place next chapter are they @BikerPon3
Either way, Good chapter as always my friend
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Eh... anthro isn't really my thing.
I hope it wont. I am hoping for something alone the line of Luke going to bed alone and waking up to a siren using him as a body pillow and then proceeds to do something embarrassing or idiotic (or just kick/throw Fleur to the other side of the room) .
That bat pony Glory doesn't know how lucky she was.
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Bugs.
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I second this. Let them get to know each other a little more. Let that attraction build!
Body pillow moment would be cute/funny as heck. Cute moments are like cocaine to me.
Or, do what you please. I love this thing and will read whatever you write regardless.
Looking forward to more.
Fine with lewd things happening. His resistance so far has been based almost entirely on some forced and useless concept of stubbornness which he himself doesn't seem to see a real reason to hold onto and is just holding up as a defense mechanism against a world he's already grown used to and therefore no longer even needs. Even the most manly of men would have called in the big guns available to them at this point, when they know for a fact all their efforts mean nothing and everyone around them is keeping them from being able to do anything for themselves.
I'm more concerned with how far they're both willing to let this go, since clearly they're both trying so hard not to just tear into each other as both carnally and passionately as they can, for no reason other than stubbornness on one end and fear of driving the other away on the other end. Both of which are silly at this point, but not something either of them realizes yet.
They have to start slipping here and there if they're going to get past this at any time, by my reading. More affection than can be laughed off as 'close friends', touching too often, too long, brief moments of confused passion and want becoming more drawn out and involved. ... That sort of thing is what I see in my mind's eye when I picture this going down.
*Raises hand, but puts it in 'to read later' section anyways.*
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I keep thinking of the "efficiency" apartment in Spiderman, the door that had to be kicked in and a doorknob that would fall off when tugged. Hah!
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This was great. I need moar~♡
Im hyped for lewd stuff happening
"strolling"?
Might have been mentioned before.. too lazy to check. Also might have been one or two more but my bed beckons.
Enjoyed the shite out of this one. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :3
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Thanks for your comments! I'll start writing the next chapter as soon as I can.
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Y'know, it's funny you should mention that.
Click for context.
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Really? You're going there?
Luke's couch is trash, but even if it wasn't, Fleur could just teleport it if he was bothered about keeping it.
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... Isn't that a bit rapey? Especially if he goes to bed alone. I mean, if they fell asleep on the couch together or something, maybe.
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Seems like you're one of the only ones at this point. I'm actually good either way, but I would've thought more people might've be saying: But when's the cl0p tho?
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Yeah, it's kinda similar to that.
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Nice catch. It has been fixed.
You remind me why I hate starting an unfinished story, and I mean that in the best way possible. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Down for some well written lewd, my dude
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I'm more than fine with hormone-driven, awkward SFW fumbling through this relationship. It's rather obvious that she has all the experience and confidence while he feels like a teen getting poached by the far-too-sexy cougar.
The fallout from the potentially racist bank is what I'm looking forward to with a big ol' tub of popcorn.
Still going strong. Pony on!
Ah, there it is. The "show off the hottie to the flabbergasted neighbors" chapter. I can't wait for the follow-up chapter: "showing off the full-on fishpony to the flabbergasted noble neighbors."
Huh. Learn new uses for old words every day. I've known "tepid liquid" and "tepid emotion," but that's a first for "tepid action." I had to check, but it's apparently a perfectly valid use for the word.
I'd say you've covered all your bases, and that there's a 100% chance of it happening or not happening.
P.S. I got $20 on Fleur waking up tomorrow, forgetting he's there down the hall, or something, and walking by him "au natural," with messy main and tail, coat all mussed, and no makeup. Maybe with the fishpony side also on clear, sleepy display. Followed naturally by a short freakout.
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True, but I SWEAR I have seen this EXACT situation before! HELL I can even tell you how the WHOLE CHAPTER panned out to!
"oh luke when are you going to learn the siren will always win if it perceives you are mistreated,bullied,hurt,or direspected she will do everything in her power to make you safe and happy and loved, also if another mare tries to take you from her she will guarantee that her displeasure will be known. so just give up trying to disuade her you won't win. you sdhould count your lucky stars a siren is attracted to you. you will always be cared for". great story i look forward to more.
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With the way things are going I'm fine with it too. I'm one of those people that's not there just for clop, rather I like to read to where it builds up to that, to feel that satisfaction of the two characters have reached that area of their relationship just feels kinda beautiful. I really like this story and hope that there is a happily ever after!
A prostitute and a bank have now been added to Fleurs list of undesirable elements that could be a future problem for her hubby.
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Did it stop at a place where it "feels" complete?
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Kiiiiiind of?
The UST got resolved and not left hanging.
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I was going to, but by the time I popped my head in, I saw that someone had already taken care of that for me.