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Zis fashion horse smells. SO COULD YOU! Parfum D'etalon.
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You may skip this ad in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1...
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Nope. This ad is unskippable.
In that case, why not go all the way and make this a self-insert? Or did I already ask this?
This paragraph made me giggle.
I love Siren Fleur. But Siren Fleur is fucking terrifying. But still, I love the big water-danger-noodle...!
Well that'll be an undertaking.
But if she's THAT dedicated to him he might be able to pull it off, if nothing else the fact that he's supporting Her against herself buys him leverage.
Plus I bet the sex is crazy girl level.
“You work at J’adore long enough, Luke—you learn to avoid Fleur when she has the glowies-”
Why do I hear Drowning Pool queuing up in the background?
Nice chapter
Beautifully done as always! Your writing always paints a vivid picture.
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But she is not snek
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Ah, but when Fleur finally goes 'fck it' and lets her out wholly and completely she may well be, looking like the Sirens the Pillars banished, whom were big HELL-NO-fish-noodles! I wait for the Chapter when this happens...
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If - for whatever reason - they dare to go after Luke... they're gonna be bloody finished!
Luck does not need to try to control the siren she will be willingly controlled by her only true love.
this chapter is amazing.
yes i've been waiting for this for a long time
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No
OOHOO, I catch up with all of the chapters this morning, and I get ANOTHER chapter to read on the same day?? You are too kind biker, I can not wait for the next chapter.
Great chapter
For some reason, l am getting the feeling that there is a Minotaur about to be made into various steaks, roasts and ground beef.
am i the only one who thought the necklace would look kind of like milasandres from game of thrones..
Ahhhh! Another update so swiftly?! Zis truly is a great month!
And so the choice has been made.
WHEN THE SIREN IS SUS HAHA I HAVE MIDDLE SCHOOL HUMOUR
Yes, this is good.
More please!!! This is really interesting!
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Undone the world, probably not, not by itself. Celestia has the latest and most convenient way to manage the Sun, not the only one. Of course, others would most likely want to avenge her and that could go on an apocalyptic scale, but the sirens, as opposed ot their hosts, are clearly not rational beings. It easily could lead to their extinction, and they wouldn't care too much.
And as for power level thing, it's really a matter of suprise and knowledge, And, how much you outnumber your opponent, the impact of which scales exponentially (a bit less than squared). The Dazzlings got the boot even without her direct involvement when they were being assholes; clearly the sirens aren't godlike either, at least not all of them.
EDIT: and also Celestia is on a time limit, and wants to impart the seriousness of the situation as effectively as possible. She might be overemphasising the danger to herself to get the point across.
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At least this one can be booped, it doesn't have the hurt juice.
Binged, tracked, and liked
I read this amazing story even before I had my account! And now it's finally revived! Hurray for the holy resurrection!
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Thank you.
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This might happen. I haven't decided if I'm going to attempt this angle of not.
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Thank you. But don't be so sure, Luke is going to find out she's a bit of a handful...
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I actually totally missed this. I went back and reread it after seeing these comments.
Very sus indeed.
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Me too. This chapter was fun to write.
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I'mma start writing it tonight if I can.
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Happy to see you're as based as always lmao
...and the traitor is Fancy Pants. Either because he was manipulated through his love for Fleur, or it was his idea to (kill?) the one who stole her heart.
A Reference perhaps?
I was rereading this then you posted this chapter, fucking awesome chapter btw! Now to re-re-read this story for like the 10th time
Keep up the good work!
Looking forward to next chapter
Well this has easily become my favorite HiE story.
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Funnily enough, yes. I thought of this story as I typed that line. It's been sitting in my tracking for a few days. I will get round to reading it at some point.
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I keep doing the same. Mainly looking for seeds that I can develop. I've actually found a couple that I left before I came up with the main story arc that happen to fit quite well.
So the Crystal is what? A sentient artifact? Primordial being? Crystallized Darkness?
The more I see of the Siren, the more I think it (she?) isn’t “Evil” persay but simply nature personified.
So there are Proditors (Traitors) among the party? Well I agree with the Siren, they need a sudden loss of weight, as after all the only sentence for Treason is Death!
Honestly I am loving this more and more! Can’t wait for the shit to hit the fan next chapter!
On a side note: I really, REALLY want Luke to use that crystal shard and build a Lightsaber with Celestias help
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that just sounds like all kinds of fun to me. all kinds of fun.
I'm getting some serious Fable II vibes from the Shard...
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Tastey
Good to see this being updated again
Not only did I pass my sailing 101 exam today, but got THE UPDATE!! YYYYESHSISBRIANSUODBDBD
I read this back in 2018 when it was only 4 chapters long. Glad to run into it again.
I could read this chapter 20 times and still be just as glued to each word each time!
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Kek.
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And not the only reference....
If you don't get this, then call a guardsmare to help you.
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Fortunately I'm quite familiar with Lily, Artemis, Honour, and that sexy batpone Purity.
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I see what you did there.