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Neat.
The only words that are the most helpful when dealing with Discord is: ...Well Shit!
Oh shit, here we go again.
Thank you for the chapter.
Nice
Woah...
a new day a new chapter of J'adore! That being said I am very interested in seeing Fleur check out Earth with Luke, and I typically hate it when stories does this stuff.
You've been reading Everyday Life With Guardmares haven't you Squidward?
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Fuck yes I have.
I love it.
well biscuits this is not going to be good.
Luke is home or is he?
and Discord my friend is up to all kind of good
this chapter is grate and i love how this is heading.
but how is the siren going to handle having Luke removed from her life like this?
When I read the description, I presumed "Siren" was being used ala a "femme fatale".
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For the record, I'm enjoy J'adore, myself.
Well, shit. This is the equiv of a lover's spat, isn't it? Discord was like, "let me court you, Siren! Think of the Chaos we might cause!" And the Siren was like "you are not my Consort. Fuck. Off!" Now Luke's caught in the middle -- and Discord has totally, utterly, colossally fucked up. Now the Siren is angry. Now the Siren is really freaking PISSED and there is NOTHING she will not do to get Luke back. Congrats, Dissy, mate, you've fucked over two worlds, because the Siren will find Luke and she WILL tear apart anything and everything that gets in her way. Great job breaking it all.
As one of the older bronies (perhaps one of the oldest), I like to think I am conversant with old pop singers like Peggy Lee (Is that All There is? is my personal favorite of her recordings), but I have absolutely no idea which Peggy Lee song you are referencing. Perhaps it was back in an earlier chapter? If not, then I can only imagine it has something to do with "look at those short legs go," which I couldn't find anywhere. I'm a little embarrassed at being this ignorant.
To show even more ignorance, what is a PoE?
Is this going to turn into another fic where seventy chapters and oceans of drama could be prevented by the two main characters having a ten second honest conversation? Because this site (and pop culture at large) already has enough of those and it gets old.
Now that I've had more time to put my thoughts into words, here's what's bugging me.
For the past dozen chapters, it is clear to Luke that his life and destiny are being affected/controlled by forces and beings he knows next to nothing about.
The one person who has LITERALLY ALL THE ANSWERS and who's SINGLE LIFE GOAL is to love Luke, has at no point volunteered any information. In fact, Fleur, an immortal, seems 1000% committed to the tween romance trope of "Oh my DARK and MYSTERIOUS past is too DARK, I can't POSSIBLY tell him" that is likely older than she is at this point.
All leading up to the inevitable (very very tired) point where a villain/antihero goes "Oh, s/he hasn't TOLD you, the DARK and MYSTERIOUS past? Well let me!!"
"No, they're lies, don't listen to my DARK AND MYSTERIOUS PAST"
The fact that at no point in the weeks/months that Fleur and Luke have had together have they had a SINGLE conversation where Fluer gives Luke even the tiniest clue about what the actual fuck is going on is actually impossible to believe at this point.
Like, "Oh hey, your airship seems to be actually some kind of dark god?"
Fleur: "don't worry about it lol"
Luke "a'ight lol :y"
I know it can be fun to paint immortals like Celestia/Luna, Discord, and in this case Fleur as clueless in relationships, but come on, how does Fleur think that hiding literally everything about her and her past is going to work with the person that she plans to be with forever??
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I'm a simple guy. I see a fic I like, I drop a reference.
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You're close.
But Discord is a liar.
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It's Why Don't You Do Right. PoE means Pony on Earth.
J'adore is not PoE.
Discord being discord as usual, with an interesting twist.
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I haven't heard that one. I'll have to give it a listen. Thank you.
It's good to see the old singers and old songs aren't forgotten.
Oh man, things are getting intense!
So is Fleur using a fucking mega-fortress of death as a company car???
That’s actually pretty metal.
Can't wait for next chapter 🙂
Yikes that was pretty dark. I think Discord unintentionally put both Equador and Earth in danger. Because we now have an unchained and very PISSED OFF Siren. Discord if antything YOU just sentenced Equador to death with this act
I've seen enough hentai to know where this COULD go (but obviously isn't).
A new chapter, yay!
Usually discord pulling people from earth is a source of conflict, but sending a human back being a source of conflict? That's rare indeed.
Nice
What does PoE mean?
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Pony on earth. Inverse of human in equestria.
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Oh, ok.
Well.... shit.....
Yeah Discord is behaving like a jealous ex and got blasted for it (awesome). Correct me if I am wrong but weren't we promised lewds a few chapters ago or I am just losing my mind?
Well. That escalated quickly.
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Given that this is Discord we’re talking about, I’m not so sure about the “un” in “unintentionally”.
Of course, also given that this is Discord we’re talking about, I’m sure things went at least partly the way he planned them all along but are still entirely capable of coming back to bite specifically him in the butt. He may know a lot, but he’s (generally, and certainly as depicted in the show itself) not really as smart as he thinks he is.
Wow
Let's. Fuggin. GOOOOO!
It may be a hot take but I didn't really enjoy this take on Discord, not as chaotic or whimsical. Though I understand you are trying to express just how powerful Fleur is. It felt a little rushed I think things could have been said a bit differently but I am curious to see how this turns out. I have been greatly enjoying the story thus far.
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Normally I do write Discord a little more true to form, but it was hard to make it fit around his feelings about Luke just being given control of the shard. (Maybe I'm just not there skill-wise yet?) There are a couple of whimsical and joke-y interactions between them in the next chapter. (Kind of)
That said, I know some people will have disliked this chapter. I knew even before I posted that it was not going to be as popular as some of the previous chapters. Even JimboTex warned me it might not go so well. But, I think it's necessary for the set up into the next chapter, which was pretty fun to write.
And when something is fun to write, it's usually entertaining to read as well.
In a twisted way I can actually imagine this being beneficially productive.
My guess is that Fleur is effectively sitting on a weapon of mass destruction - maybe two - and she's understandably hesitant to let anyone she cares about - like Luke - know the whole truth for fear of scaring them to the other side of reality. Her potential permanent connection to Luke could easily make her extra cautious with regard to this.
So Discord shows her that Luke's people have a history with WMDs, and Luke isn't as bothered by this as Fleur fears.
I'm not sure if I'm simplifying that too much or not enough...
I've heard that if you put them on a leash, they'll rapidly spin around you like a buzzsaw.
(About bloody time v1.18 finally gets a release date)
This story just. Gets. Better.
Maybe I'm missing something but I don't feel like there's been any romance past a bit of flirting here and there. I like the fic overall I just feel it could use a bit of a slowdown to fleshout Luke and Fleur's relationship a bit.
Well shit, while I think Discord is telling some of the truth, I doubt it’s the whole truth.
The use of Memento Mori (for those that don’t know, it’s Latin meaning sums up to: All things CAN and WILL die and is typically used philosophically to mean that death is but one action away) is interesting, though while I suspect that Flures past and that of the “Ship” is steeped in blood and death, I highly doubt it’s innocent blood.
The siren and that of the entity in the Crystal has so far shown remorse for the past and the actions they took. Which leads me to suspect that they were forced to act in a way that might have cost civilian losses, be it war or rebellion is yet to be seen, but that’s always a cost in the end.
“The Road to Hell is pathed with good intentions” as they say.
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Honestly? Discord as a character is difficult to write, it’s very hard to get into that chaotic mindset that is necessary to write him.
I love this depiction of Discord, he isn’t putting up any fronts while still being chaotic in his actions AND being serious to boot!
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I think it’s less the speed or the story and more of the fact that they haven’t really HAD a chance to flush anything out relationship wise. All I can say without Doxing myself is that the lives of a Model is Chaotic, you flitter around lots, have to follow a lot of rules and have little time to yourself.
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Agreed. I've read a couple of other human X Fleur fics and they get around that problem by having the human Fleur's personal assistant, manager or photographer. Of course they're not trying to also juggle a siren sub-plot onto of working in the fashion industry AND trying to have romance as well.
I can't help but Imagine the story just ending here
great chapter though, can't wait to see what happens to the love birds next!
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Chapter 16 is finished, just needs last minute tweaking. I should be posting it tonight. (Hopefully Tex will log on to pre-read before it goes up)
Chapter 17 is turning out to be very interesting though. I stayed up way later than I should have last night working on it. The majority of it is just conversation, but it's a pretty interesting conversation, and it adopts a similar style as some of the earlier chapters.
First time I've heard ermagerd used in a story, lol.
With the phrase, my mind goes to Unus Annus.
I understood that reference.
If only Fluttershy realized this lmao
Everyday Life with Guardsmares reference!