Thanks for the plug, dude!

Also, Fleur is so damn smexy.

Is Fleur a vampire pony or something?

Hmmm. Smells like an adventure is about to happen.

fitting title indeed

Don’t fuck up.

Fleur the siren? Oh. ... Oh, okay. This is new. I like this.

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Siren

After all, it was not the nature of a siren to covet an individual more than the attention that could be gained from said individual

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Thanks I must have missed that part.

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After all, it was not the nature of a siren to covet an individual more than the attention that could be gained from said individual

So you make her a siren and add a bit of the comic too (in that she is basically a general and a very skill warrior) The reason she is with Fancy Pants all the time is…well Fancy is a bit of clucks and naive nature so he has a lot of enemies that want him death. Fleur just resign her job and became like a pseudo bodyguard for him.
Fancy is just too dense to notices, so to him she is only his best friend that is a bit clingy.

And don't worry Luke its a naval ship, one that is not super technological advance like the ones we have. The magic part you can leave that to the unicorns, you just need to get familiar to know what does what. Just think its a pirate ship! that helps. Jeje seriously I hope he has play Assassin Black Flag, at least that way he could have a clue.

Hey did anyone else hear this coming from Fleur head?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQc0xu2r4-U

Jeje sorry, couldn't resist

The pretty unicorn from the studio was now stood in the middle
Standing?

A Siren? Really? I can only pray that this story is significantly different from 'Slipstream'.

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Siren, I do believe.

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The pretty unicorn from the studio was now stood in the middle
Standing?

Past tense formulations like "was stood" are acceptable in that weird version of English they speak over in Britain - along with all those unnecessary u's. (Note to Biker: )

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As long as he doesn't use words like snogging or gormless (i do so enjoy that one tho) I'll be okay.

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I can only pray that this story is significantly different from 'Slipstream'.

Certain aspects of certain characters are similar, but overall the two stories are different.

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along with all those unnecessary u's.

Noah Webster throws a tantrum and now all you Americans butcher the English language on a daily basis.

You should be ashamed.

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We made the English language better.

Could you post a translation for the French parts? I kind of want to what the siren is saying

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Sure you did.

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Just ctrl+C the part you want to understand, type 'translate' into google, then ctrl+v the text into the search bar.

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And the video has made its return to me once again.

CALLED IT.

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Hah, I totally feel ya. I've beta'd for Aussi's, Brits, and Canadians... so many u's.

And Fleur is a Siren? Dang it, so close on my guess indeed. It's interesting that she's got legs rather than a fishy tail. Shapeshifting ability perhaps? Also, heh, let's hope Luke is smart enough not to ask Fleur how old she is right after introduction.

Oo! I think I've found what qualifies Luke for this job! There was actually a fourth job qualification on his resume:

• Flies masterfully by the seat of my pants.

Le gaspe! She's a siren in disguise? How exotic! Color me extremely curious. Will we see fishpone snuggles in the future?!

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Sexy and melty? Yes, she is.

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Your name. It is familiar.

...

Ah! But of course, I read one of your fics! In fact, I've just re-read the hole damned thing due to the recent updates. You better not leave TLaP hanging for another two years.

You know I have being meaning to ask. Didn't you say that Luke was a hiker? That is not something an average job can do. Those people need practice and experience as well as training in survival and keep calm under stress. Specially snow mountain climber…which he is since he say his last trip send him to the crystal empire.

Why didn't he opted to be an explorer, or an explorer? The movie told us that there are things beyond Equestria, and all the ones involve have seeing weirder things than him. So why wouldn't he go to…oh!

"GOD Damn it Celestia. You told Luke that those jobs don't exist, did you?"

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I'm sure I've seen you lurking in a few GLA gdocs before...

You saw nothing.

*Ducks back behind the cardboard cutout of a perfectly good crayon-drawn bush that nobody would ever suspect in a forest*

Someone has went and downvoted all my comments on this fic.

Oh, the salt. It is delicious.

Good taste in pictures.
It appears I've used the exact same one.

Noah Webster throws a tantrum and now all you Americans butcher the English language on a daily basis.

You should be ashamed.

Oy! Keep in mind we also had Nathaniel Bowditch, who kept more British ships from sinking than the entire Royal Navy! 😨

He cleaned up that seagoing abomination that your John Hamilton Moore called The New Practical Navigator (HUNDREDS of errors!) - I think that all the British ships Nathaniel saved earned Noah the right to go to town on the English language. 😇

(As a child, I loved the novel Carry On, Mr. Bowditch - named my production company after a line from the book.)

Is... is it just me, or are those fangs I see on the cover art? Is she a vampony!? Must read...

So what we have here is a great base of a story. Human is stubborn and wants a job, gets hooked up with Celestia for a job and will now have to tackle his personal feeling for Fleur as he works for her on her ship. Over the next couple of chapters we see how that turns out, he gives her the dicking and shenanigans ensue as ponies find out Fleur is dating a monster.

See if someone came up to me with that I'd go "Fuck yeah man enjoy your story, you got a great interpersonal conflict of pony society and true love. That story can really go somewhere with some great comedy and lovely romantic fluff. Don't fuck it up by adding some crazy plotline about her being a vampire or some shit."

Alas, it was a siren instead. I'm out.

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Don't read too much into my little digs at 'Murikans. I only do it to piss my pre-reader off.

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Over the next couple of chapters we see how that turns out, he gives her the dicking and shenanigans ensue as ponies find out Fleur is dating a monster.

Yeah, I get it. But this has been done before, many times, by better writers.

Don't fuck it up by adding some crazy plotline about her being a vampire or some shit.

Alas, it was a siren instead. I'm out.

Well, damn—you almost sound salty. Yeah, she's a siren. Why should this mean I'm going to 'fuck it up'? What you're essentially doing here is assuming the story is going to be terrible because of something you don't like. Hell, you may be right, but you've just written the whole thing off as a lost cause without even giving it a chance.

But hey, that's your prerogative.

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I only do it to piss my pre-reader off.

Actually, I'm not that pissed off about it. It's kind of a mutual trolling thing we have going on, like my jabs at all the unnecessary u's in British spelling standards.

Second story I have encountered with a prench speaking siren riding shotgun in a 'innocent' looking mare

I think I found another story to add to my top ten list. keep up the great work.

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Would the first story happen to have been Slipstream?

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So uh, can I get some links to where this has been done before? I like this type of story specifically, plus yours has left me with an itch and I wanna scratch it. Keep up the good work!

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This.

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Why yes, however did you know?

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Because I happen to be the prereader for that fic as well?

Seems interesting. I look forward to seeing more of this.

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Ah

Hey do me a flavor

Fluer as a Siren, nice choice, I'm sure it'll add some good moments, liking it so far, can't wait for the next chapter

Well, this just got interesting!

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Not if they are battery power

this is great looking forward to the next chapter!