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Love between a mortal and an immortal is kind of like global thermonuclear war in that way.
Dis is pretty legit. Always look forward to another chapter
I am so looking forward to the next chapter! Luc is in for it now! I hope he let's himself love and cherish this beautiful creature who loves him so much!
So wait? does that mean it's going to make him Immortal like the Siren? It would make sense, what's the point in finding a Consort if they Die so soon down the line right?
THAT is gonna be a major shock to Luke, the thought of outliving every one you could call friends, that would be difficult to live with, though I guess having a Immortal Lover would be worth it in the end. Some one who is going to live just as long as you, who will love you for Litterly all Eternity and be wholly Loyal to you no matter what? I would give up my Mortality for that kind of chance.
Oh man, oh jeez. I can't even wait for the next chapter. And I'm usually quite patient, especially when it comes to Fimfic. It's a testament to how much I enjoy this story. Keep up the good work!! 🤘
good chapter just a little sad that its over...
daww, she was gonna murder his face for being rude
das cute meng
ima ship dis shit harder
Haven't read yet, haven't looked at the comments, just had to stop and immediately congratulate you on the choice of last name. So obvious and yet I've never seen it done before, round of applause from me bud.
Now to actually start reading.
Celestia, please stop being a condescending bitch. And Fleur... pull your head out of your ass, please. If your Siren likes Luke, then for god's sake let her go after him in whatever way she wants. If it was me there instead of Luke , I'd loathe the fact that Celestia was interfering with my life. Fleur ought to tell her to mind her own business.
I wonder what will happen when Somnambula meets Stonenambula. Thank you for another wonderful chapter!
Love Stonenambula, such a cute little touch to the story and this chapter especially.
If I could give this story ten thumbs up/likes for every chapter, and seven favorites, I would.
I'm pretty curious as to just what the FUCK was going on a thousand years ago in canon. Pony of Shadows, Sombra, Discord, Tirek, Nightmare Moon. Probably more that I can't think of off the top of my heads. Ah, right, of course, the Sirens.
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This was the great Time of Troubles, when the very Bones of the Earth were Spoken and the world screamed as it was overwritten. Warped by the Bones of the Earth, the World could only call upon the Counterforce, the guardians.
I wonder if she'd roll over and wiggle for belly rubs too?
Heh, of course she would. No pony is immune to the power of human hands!
(Lyra is the only one not afraid to say it)
Eeeeeeeeeeee! Perfect.
So, I'm not the only one who thinks affectionate ponies get a bit... "licksy"
So... Fleur is going be the awkward, inexperienced one in the relationship? Methinks Luke is going to be persistently surprised by her isolation-induced relative inexperience.
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Presumably the same things that were going on in Equestria a thousand years after that. After all, Nightmare Moon, Discord, Sombra, Tirek, Chrysalis, Glimglam, and whatever arranged things so Twilight would unwittingly release the Pony of Shadows!
Turns out, Harmony wants the music to be interesting, in the Chinese sense.
Surprisingly uneventful for the first time Luke's ever addressed Siren.
Heh, until the next chapter, at least...
Looks like things are shaping up for a climactic encounter.
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Well you see, they ran out of tacos a thousand years ago. It was a bad time for everyone and some people grew a little too, desperate.
Great chapter! Just a heads up though, as Celestia is a female, Fleur would use "amie" instead of ami, but you are correct in use mon as apposed to "ma" for the article.
Damn... Was really getting into the story and then I had to go and catch up... Welp, definitely getting a fav from me.
I wouldn’t worry to much about the canon time frame. It’s never really made sense. It’s to bunches up and over lapping. In some places it’s just absurd. It makes much more sense for the sisters to be much older and to spread the historic events out more.
Stonenambula is such a treat! You did great with this chapter, can't wait too see how the next one goes!
i actually hope that the Somnambula statue follows him around like a pet and also appears more in the story.
Man sometimes I can read this fic easily just skip from word to word seamlessly, but sometimes you just lay this accent way to fuckin thick lmao.
Man, I enjoy this story every chapter. The writing style, smooth interaction, just the right amount of conflict to feel natural and cliffhangers that leave ya wondering what's next without feeling like a needless cutoff. Good job, man!
Loved the interactions with Stonenambula. Really hope Somnambula shows up eventually so Fleur can have her friend back.
wow a grate chapter, i can see the battle that Fleur’s is fighting is side her own head.
this is getting way more interesting.
I'm a bit confused does fleur even like him or just going along with it to please the siren?
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The Siren fully desires Luke. There is bleedover into Fleur from that affection. She'll come around. It's already showing.
Ah, it was the Siren that was saying mon amour. Makes sense.
I hope Luke gets to interact with the Siren more. Other then possessive, i wonder what her personality is like...
Oh... my... god.
OHMYGOD that was just aggressively adorable
I need more! This story is so compelling and entertaining that the thought of this not being continued is agony!
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His only real friends in Equestria are Celestia and Fleur, are they not? He's not outliving his friends at all. (And a certain Somna-kitty golem.)
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The Siren is basically soul-bound to Luke by some sort of Fate/Love magic from what I can tell. He was always meant to be her Consort. Fleur seems to like him herself but is tetchy about the whole affair, since unlike the Siren she has very reasonable doubts and fears like a mind born to be mortal would. So if I had to say, the Siren is head over heels for him and Fleur is warming up to the idea of being with him.
Luke himself finds her drop-dead gorgeous and great to be around. In some sort of a mix of his personal feelings and this magical connection he is attracted to both Fleur and her Siren, respectively, which causes his own fears and doubts.
That's from what I'm reading into it so far.
That part of canon is bs anyway xD I dont think anyone really takes it seriously. It will not be missed.
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True, for the moment. But we all know you can't go forever in Equestria and NOT make more friends and we also all know he is gonna meet the Element's at some point, not to mention Luna and many more. Just wouldn't be a story without them
Point being, it's gonna be a major change, both Emotionally and psychology for Luke. Can you imagine seeing Generations after Generations pass before your eyes, yet you, yourself never age beyond the point of your Ascendancy to an Immortal? To see those that have defined History age, wither and die all while you can't?
We saw a glance of that in the latest chapter, the sheer pressure it puts on ones mind and soul is a heavy weight to bare. I wouldn't wish Immortality on my Worst Enemy and I feel so, so sorry for Fleur and what it must have done to her.
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I'm not that big of a fan of the 'immortality is the worst thing ever' concept. Even within our own short, almost-pointless mortal lives we learn to deal with loss. Some can even grieve on the go, so to speak. With time comes experience comes wisdom and skill. Right now he might feel... put out, if he was to become immortal and to learn that this was the case, but I highly doubt that in the theoretical immortal future he wouldn't get used to it. Oh, there'd always be that pain of separation, but it would eventually become sort of old hat. Less pain, more fond remembrance maybe.
As for Fleur, who knows? Consider that Somna was her ONLY friend, as opposed to having many friends who sorta just spontaneously die all the time. She has no experience in dealing with the matter. I'd also posit that being creatures who manipulate (and are potentially emotivores) emotions, they also feel emotion more strongly when it does affect them. Lump this in with their two-minds-one-body situation, and the Siren and Fleur have bleedover between a mind made for immortality, and a mortal's mind. I would say their situation is not at all indicative of what we might call a normal ascension.
But at this point in time, yes. Basically ANY new change is going to throw Luke for a loop, I feel.
He'll grow a glowing gem on the neck? That's how sirens procreate?
Reading about the part about how some sirens looked all their lifes after a consort, and when they didn't found one......man, that's kinda dark.
sirens ain't got it easy, that's a fact.
I like how easily Luke addressed her before realizing it. I wonder what pet names he's going to start using? He just can't blurt out "little miss water-demon" all the time. And he probably should have a little talk with the Siren and explain that while he appreciates her 'defending his honor' she shouldn't do ANYTHING to anyone unless his life were in danger.
Stonenambula is best enchanted statue. Wait; can she fly? I'm liking the "Everlasting Enchantment" idea and I think Celestia is right. Fleur just needs to make her move. She's got nothing to worry about regarding Luke. He's already figured out he likes his boss. I think he has a similar worry that's keeping him from make a move on her himself. I can picture an adorkable scene where the two are awkwardly trying to make the first move on each other.
Thanks for the new chapter and i look forward to reading the next one.
Is it bad that i like the idea of beijg a siren. I mean the only real doneside is the imortallity and possoble a bad second personality. Everything else relates to people and ponies alike.
Isnt arpund people = mild insanity.
Singing make outher want to sing along and fell something from it. (slightly amplafyed)
Srankth when man or in a life or death situations.
The two main benifits are that you can understand yourself better (you can understand, communicate, and interact with your darker side and learn from it.) and if your darker side finds love then you know he/she is a keeper.
This is a really well detailed story. Well done.
Good luck in the future and have fun doing it.
She licked him! It's official! Fleur has dibs on Luke!
Would it be possible for you to put translations for the French? Having to google translate every line in the language is mildly inconvenient.
Love the story, man. Keep up the good work. Can’t wait for Fleur’s reunion with Sommy.
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It’s written in a way you don’t really need the translation to get the gist of it via context.
Also, Luke doesn’t understand French. We, the audience get a little more information than the main character does; but no so much as to remove the intrigue.
The only mistake is that sex hasn't happened yet!
But seriously, great chapter love Luke's actions and comments in this chapter. Some ponies just have it coming!
Go get your man, Ladies!
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nah nah don't be horny now, it needs to be perfect :D
I found this story very fun and interesting to read, I like how you included the Pillars in this, I like Somnambula the most; I think that's how you spell it?
I'm loving this story something fierce. I don't know how it escaped my attention for so long but I'm on board the train now. Very much looking forward to the next part.
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How about a nice game of chess?
(If no one else will acknowledge the reference, I will)
Defo need to bring back living Somnambula from the abyss later.