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But when's the clop, tho?
Mmmm... Developing well. Looking forward to their relationship deepening.
And the sex.
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romance first!
Glad to see another chapter! Totally jealous of a European motorcycle trip as well.
I can't wait for Fleur to totally shatter Luke's bad reputation with the nobles, it's always entertaining to see!
Well as Obi-Wan Kenobi once said.
" Run Luke, Run!"
I'm really liking this so far! Hope your work schedule simmers down soon-ish in the future ;) I know how that is.
The only thing i could find is that you called Gilded Gilda when he first spots her. Other than that loved this chapter.
Eh. Fangs, magically changing eyes.
Just adds to the fun, no?
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It's an old joke between me and the author as part of carrying on a tradition between Pusspuss and JeremyStorm.
Continuez s'il vous plaît. Je suis curieux de voir où l'histoire va.
This is super fun. Fleur is fun.
I can't wait for more.
I do wonder why the Siren is so possessive of Luke... Is it because he is an entirely new 'thing'? A new species to try to dominate? I can't wait to get into it.
Damn it Luke... don't resist! Just pet her fur, run your hands through her mane, play with her ears; you know you want to. Plead ignorance, or say it's a human cultural thing!
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Mares loves the hands... (human magic, baby!) *bow chika bowwow*
If you're going on a tour, better bring a pony along for one of those "where's the pony now?" pic feeds.
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i assumed, but still. gib dat romance!
Gate 1 "fuck, da monkie is back"
Gate 2 "quick! hit 'em"
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Romance is dead. It's always about that clop. Now if only we could get to some clop from another author.
Not wanting to sound like a total arse but you want to trade the J with a G.
Other than that small blip, love the way you're writing this and eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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its about the journey duel to the clop! cant win the goal without going through the course!
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Well, you never know. It could be a very different Jem entirely.
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That's more of a silly nickname he gives her.
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I see what you did there.
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Oh, there's a reason. All shall be revealed in later chapters.
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I would, but I don't have any... unless you count a Fluttershy keyring.
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Nice catch. Fixed.
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Um... wut the hell is that...
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Is she part vampony?
Edit: Forget this, i am an idjit
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Dunno if this is a typo. Jem is amazing, after all.
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An old Hasbro property from my childhood, apparently.
Believe it or not, they were running it in an early morning time slot on the local pony channel here a few years ago...
What was with the sudden hug in the elevator?
Did J'adore, just slip out and basically say hi to Luke? I though she was going to lick him…and she better not, Celestia might get jealous or invite them into a double date
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Psst... J'adore is the name of the company, not the siren.
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Oh sorry, I forgot the name of the siren…did you mention her name in chapter 2? I forgot if you did
Damnit. Fine. Favorited.
I like the style and pacing.
Awesome.
Awesome, thanks for the update!
I was getting worried this would be another forgotten fic. Thanks for the update. Loved it.
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So the siren has a name then?
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I remember it as well. It wasn't bad.
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I'm pretty sure it doesn't have a name, but Biker would probably know best. I'm just the pre-reader.
Touch her! Do it!!!
Great job!
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Well my question still stand why did the siren almost lick him out of the blue?
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The answer to that is a bit spoilery, and has to do with Biker's headcanon for sirens in this fic (and Slipstream, for that matter).
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Understood holding my tongue then. I just hope Celestia appear soon, Luke really has a story to talk with her
No, Fuck that! She's a mystery wrapped in an enigma, and being all evasive about it. Those fangs were no joke though! If there is even the slightest possibility she might want to tear out my throat...
"Fleur. I don't mind waiting until we're in private, but I need answers, and 'no' isn't going to cut it."
(Because, really... she looks pony, but ponies aren't eternal, don't grow fangs, and don't go all predator on you when you're in a tight spot. Luke doesn't know her true self, doesn't know her history, and most importantly, doesn't know what she wants. I wouldn't feel safe around her after what Luke just went through.)
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Stupid elevator bell just had to ding right then!
I hope you tour through Switzerland. We got amazing mountain passes with dank curves and a nice view.
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Amazing doesn't even begin to cover it. I may have only gone up Rigi and into Lucerne for a day, but holy hell was it ever worth it. God, I must have spent, like, $75 that day. Shame about the chocolate, though. It was hot that day. I didn't get to eat much of it, but it was delicious anyway. I stayed in Unteriberg that night, and that was just beautiful in the morning.
This one, I took myself. Apologies for the bad link.
i.imgur.com/iZvbt1b.jpg
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Eh. He trusts Celestia, and she wouldn't suggest something dangerous to him without his knowledge. Probably, but it's a pretty safe bet. If Celestia trusts Fleur, that's good enough. Questions do remain, but mostly for sating the curiosity, not actual safety concerns.
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Fleur wouldn't hurt him. She might get a bit possessive of him, but she'd never hurt him.
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Went through Switzerland last year. We stayed in Winterthur, Interlaken and Geneva. The place looks like a postcard. Beautiful, but everything is a tad on the expensive side.
Austria and Italy are going to be the main focus this year.
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your link's broken, yo! Also yeah, switzerland isn't really cheap :P
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Could still do a quick pass trhough then :P Anyway, great story, looking forward to the next one.
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Fixed.
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Ah, but as this chapter is so quick to point out, Fleur has pink eyes, no fangs, and is coy. This mare with blue eyes, fangs, and a fairly aggressive personality is a different ballgame. Maybe.
Does Celestia actually know about this side of her? Does Vert? No one has said anything to Luke, and Fleur is being evasive, which shouldn't instill any confidence.
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Fleur and the siren are one and the same. Two halves of a whole. Like I said, she wouldn't hurt him, despite the siren being a little... unbalanced at times.
And yeah, Celestia knows, and has known for centuries. Vert doesn't though, but he has his theories like every other pony wondering why the hell she is immortal but not an alicorn.
Also, are you going to give us a status update on the next TLaP chapter? We need our yellow alicorn fix man...
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My point was that nobody has told Luke any of this. Hence why I imagined he'd be more direct about wanting answers, and less than thrilled at Fleur's evasiveness.
The golden alicorn is recuperating... She went on a salt binge, and we're letting her sleep it off.
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Don't worry, he'll definitely be asking those questions, especially after what happens in chapter five.
And hey! You describe Etherea as golden-yellow in the first chapter of TLaP, so technically I wasn't wrong :-P Just don't let her sleep too long, okay? Especially like... two years too long...
Hey I didn't though of this but Fleur is slowly helping Luke to open up into the idea of dating a pony, sure it will take time and after that happen he clearly is not going to go after Fleur because 'A, she is his boss, and B Vert already told him that she is a mare that does not settle down' so yeah he could clearly realised that is not a very good idea.
………buuuuut it could be interesting seeing how he could start the dating game. Jeje maybe he establish a friendship with one of the models in J'adore, probably a nice little mare from Switzerland, OH or a recent addition model lady minotaur (are they still call tauro? Wouldn't be minocow?) Yeah it could help and hey she is the closest thing resemble a human so I wouldn't be surprise if he start there.
Boy will Fleur will have to think of something to let Luke now that he has a chance. And I know spoilers but hey, its free to dream right?
ThIs is pretty great.
Fuckin' cracking