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DiaperedPony


Diapered pony writing diapered stories

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Interesting. This reminds me of a style of writing I've heard of that is called, I think, Omarashi. In any case you did a great job illustrating the desperation that went into every part of him being thwarted in all of his attempts to relieve himself. Doing so in the shower is certainly most naughty but certainly works. Just water on water, right?

Are these stories meant to take place just a little after Spike had gotten out of diapers and started working alongside Twilight? Kind of him trying to make the best of things as he bridges the gap between being a diaper-wearing baby to a responsible potty using dragon?

I could only imagine how twilight potty trained him. Something tells me it was Celestia, or Twilight Velvet, who did it. Ms. Sparkle would be so into reading all the books that he'd never get out of diapers as a result of her over-analyzing how to get him to transition.

8821177 Yeah. The idea was mixing Omorashi writing with diapers and cuteness, hope that's a good mix. I think it isn't used too much in diapers stories. I think that the story probably should have the Alternate Universe tag also, because the story takes place during basically events after the fifth season beginning, but supposing a more logical scenario (at least for me) where Spike even with a pretty mature mind being able to work despite being still a baby, has just left diapers. At least in my head-canon I think that Twilight had probably helped Spike with that since she doesn't look exactly like the kind of mares who changes diapers. Of course, she would probably had used a complicated method with science and magic involved to teach him to use the potty,

Not sure if that answers your questions. If not feel free to ask more specific things. Also, thanks a lot for being a great fan of my stories. I really love that.

OMG you are amazing.

You not only made a great first chapter but you have my favorite character as the star! :moustache:

You are getting a favorite and a thumbs up from me my good friend! :pinkiehappy:

8822649 Awww Thank you so much for your nice comment. I tried my best to adapt the story that my friend share to write a good story. I really hope that you like the next ones too. Spike will still be the star of course :raritywink:

Certainly a lot of tension in this story. It builds up in just right way, too. Comedic misadventures that make you almost feel like you are in that situation yourself. You just want things to go favorably and, then, another obstacle and another and another.

I'm sure the water in the fountain felt a lot warmer after Spike released himself. Given the situation of the mall's restrooms I've got to wonder if he is truly the first to use it in such a way?
Yet another fun Omorashi. Very visual in feeling as if you are either Spike or having the agony of watching him struggle with such complications.

8879237 Awww thank you so much not only for thinking all that amazing and positive things about my story, but also for taking your time to write an opinion about a new chapter. And yeah, this kind of comedy is one of my favorites so far, pretty funny and tense in a certain way at the same time, that's basically the idea with these stories but adding new elements, locations, situations and dialogues according to the argument.

Thanks a lot again for supporting my stories :twilightsmile:

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