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DiaperedPony
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Woo-hoo! I finally got to read this!
This story came out amazing! You did a very wonderful job in going beyond any expectation I initially had about all that could happen in the story.
Nature Feathers really added to the story itself. His presence as a photographer really put on the pressure for Apple Bloom. The fact he had a camera only added to the whole effect of Apple Bloom desperately trying to figure a way out of the great fear she had of someone snapping embarrassing pictures of her.
It is also great how you made the story a whole story instead of just about Apple Bloom's 'situation'. The Nature Feathers working for a little magazine / journal helped to give good substance to what may, if not done so well, could just seem like a character around simply to intensify the situation.
The ending of walking back to Sweet Apple Acres was nice, too. Nothing like an awkward meeting to kind of try to become friends. I know I would feel weird if someone had taken such a picture, asked to use it, and just bolted. I'd feel even more awkward if I was the one who took and asked to use the picture. A pony may think someone had ill-intent if Nature Feathers just flew off.
A solid story with lots of enjoyable plot points beyond the omarashi situation for AB. Awesome!
9647089 Thank you very much for finally reading and leaving your amazing opinion to my story Yosh
It seems you really liked it. And yeah, my main idea was basically putting two stories with sense together to make it more interesting and enjoyable, as long as only two characters participated to make it more private and cozy.
Having a great and detailed opinion from an amazing writer like you means a lot for me
I will try to write more soon.