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Tropic_Turd
Prince Blueblood did nothing wrong.
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A user said to me when I was writing a story once that this wasn't relevant, however, this is great so far. The same goes for when you wrote End of Chapter 1.
This was a heist worthy of Payday 2 and GTA! Holy shit, this was awesome!
...This seems like it will be a Suicide Squad type of deal. I am ok with that. I am REALLY ok with that.
Welp. I'm interested.
-Ru
i'm interested but your having blueblood argue from too much a position of strength right now, to be absolutely frank he's desperate and they both know it. sentences like 'but thats where the deal ends' do not exist in this context, if she demands a full pardon, the royal treasury and a mansion somewhere on the coast he has to agree to it, there is no real point here where blueblood has power to argue here.
8787273
you realize miranda waller had no actual government authority and was eventually jailed for the suicide squad right?
8787671
I know, but the concept of Suicide Squad was "team comprised of convicts does job for an agency, agency absolves them of standing charges, granting them freedom." I feel it's a valid comparison.
The Elements as criminals. What a fun idea!
Looking forward to the interactions between them.
I feel validated in my Suicide Squad comparison.
Looking forward to more.
-Ru
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well to your credit flash is showing about as much competence as the handler from the movie, that is to say, a level of competence so low it actually makes the people around you less competent just by your mere presence.
i still say blue blood got what he wanted way to easily. something well have to give by the end of this, here is hoping luna issues them a royal pardon without a second thought.
so flash broke the agreement, i do hope somehow karma proceeds to pound his face in for that.
OH COME ON! You're not even trying to be subtle at this point!
8797400
The funny thing is I actually haven't watched Suicide Squad. All "references" I have made up to this point have been entirely coincidental. Even my proof-reader was surprised when I told him I haven't watched Suicide Squad because he thought those references were made on purpose.
8797419
huh.
8797420
Sorry to disappoint you. But yeah, all those references were made by accident.
So, let me get this straight. Twilight didn't hatch the egg during her exam, felt the only reason she entered the school was due to nepotism, was told by Celestia eight years later that she wasn't supposed to hatch the egg, cursed Celestia out, then ran away from home?
8797465
Yeah.
Good Grief.
8797420
That's just how things work out when you're writing sometimes, weird as it is.
8797419
i just hope you don't have celestia follow after Amanda Waller. blueblood already has played every inhumane card in the book here and if celestia still sends them back after all the shit he put them through.... well i can see her political enemies making life miserable for her.
I love it! And you even got a good Blueblood (good as in well built character), though I don't think to highly of Flash they could be better, but aside from that it is quite good.
...Boast Busters is going to be fun with this crew. I can tell.
R.I.P. Mr. Peaches and all the other animals whose sacrifices were not in vain.
R.i.P. Lucky Lenny.
hehehehe part of me want for twilight have been working for celeitie the whole time, and ever singel one of her crimes been order by sunbutt done more good then bad.
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Yeah, I hope so. I wonder if Trixie will be another filly that was 'messed up' by that damn egg.
I strangely wasn't a sequal to this
Okay, I honestly want to see a equal to this, heck i think it is going be hilarious to see this version twilight become a Alicorn and I even want to see this version of blueblood and twilight eventually hook up.
And so ends another awesome story. Will there be sequels? Or prequels? Or spin-offs? WHO KNOWS?! The future awaits us all...
Sorry to see the story end.
Glad to know there's more in store!
-Ru
...yeah you missed the dailouge there, as the repsonse would be.
"fuck you and fuck your conditions, i was promised a royal favor and i'm calling it, you can grant it or wake up tomorrow with every paper from ehre to gryphonstone publicly proclaiming the equestrian monarchy isn't worth shit"
wait what they shot an unarmed perp and he's getting a promotion
First chapter of Flash Sentry's character development and I already want to throw him to the Eldritch. Great...
This is great writing and an even better premise. I’m excited to see what lies in wait with our heroines (one with heroine)!
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I'll explain it in the sequel.
8800021
Cadance will be a lot worse than Celestia and Blueblood.
Just a small typo, it should be "They".
This was amazing, so glad I read. Hopefully, there will be a sequel one day.
Wow, the absolute subtlety here XD
Of course, the female character gets taken out in one hit(You will burn in hell for all eternity for filling the world with this cliche Hollywood.). If I can still stand after crashing my four wheeler into a tree and not black out at at`least 40 mph, then their is no reason twilight blacks out after one bloody hit. And I swear, if Twilight gets together with Flash Sentry or BlueBlood, I`m jumping off Mt. Everest. Doesn`t matter how much character they may have in the story. If you start as a piece of cardboard just to fill in a LOVE interest for Twilight, or a arrogant rich bastard. Then you shall forever be hated
Welp, I guess Im jumping off Mt Everest now.
8797465
Yep, pretty much