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Flameboy


I like Dragons. Spending time with my family. Playing games and going to the Beach.

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Spike, Discord, Thorax, Ember, Garble, and all their other friends get sucked inside a video game, which is called "EVOLVE." Twilight and Spike play it a lot; Twilight with the Hunters, and Spike with the Monsters. Spike and his gang versus Twilight's team. Who will win? While the ponies get to train with the Hunters, Spike and his team, The Extreme Squad, train with the Monsters. Twilight Thinks that that the Monsters are evil, but Spike doesn't. He wished that the Goliath will give him answers. But, Spike's gonna get his wish sooner than he thinks.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 5 )

Okay everyone, here's how this chapter goes:
A) Ember has her hand elevated at her shoulder, not on it, but it was sticking out.
B) I know I said that I would type only two ponies, but, I thought I should give all ponies so I did just that.
C) I know I said that in this chapter I would put the Storm King in this chapter, but I thought that maybe I would type or write the chapter with Discord and Fluttershy see each other. And I may have used a part from sailor Moon meeting My Little Pony by becoming Discord's friend to defeat Lord Tirek. I mean, the part with Discord's head turning into the Road Runner from Looney tunes was very funny, so I had to put that reference in this chapter.
D) Garble's line when facing Rainbow, Applejack, Pinkie, and Gummy, was from the first Kung Fu Panda movie. I mean,"Enough talk, let's fight!" Was pretty awesome.
E) I know this story might have some words that are mean, but, at least the story is funny, right?
F) Anyway, post anything mean or nice and I might put some more good stuff. Think of other things I could put in my story.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

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I don't know why people dislike this story so much. I mean, I don't like dark stories that involve the death of Twilight or her turning evil.

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