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Flameboy


I like Dragons. Spending time with my family. Playing games and going to the Beach.

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When Twilight and her friends started asking their draconic friend, Spike, about what he's done in the Dragon Lands after the following years of Twilight's coronation, they are in for a tale.

End of Season 9
Please note that I think this what happened before Spike returned to Equestria to help Twilight.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 11 )

Okay, I like the idea of this since I like the Spike x Ember ship and a story of their first date and eventual marriage could be fun, but this needs serious work.

The dialogue doesn’t feel like stuff the characters would say, the narration is all over the place and is confusing to follow, there are multiple spelling errors, and the whole thing feels way too rushed.

It’s a little too hot for the kids, no? (This chapter, I mean.)

Haha that's a cliffhanger alright

Yea I'm likening this so far

said with a lady-like tone that would make Smolder jealous. Haha really now that got me

Wonderful. It says there's gonna be a part 2. When is it? If it's already in, can I read it?

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Are you still planning the 2nd part if not I understand.

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