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NightCoreMoon


I'm Sheena. I write mostly angsty teen lesbian romantic dramedy, a few AUs, and sometimes porn.

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Wonderful little story. I love the ending! The clop is delicious and the buildup of two teenage girls so awkwardly trying to say 'Hey, wanna fuck?' 'Sure!' is adorable. Well done! (Part of me is hoping for more to see the other girls reactions to their relationship. Also AJ giving them a talking to)

That was wonderful. I don't usually read smut for mlp. I'm not sure if it's cause they aren't always well written or if I'm thrown off by the idea of our beloved ponies (or equestria girls) getting it on. But I enjoyed this a lot. It helps I'm sure that pinkiedash is my otp.

And be still my feeble lesbian heart, the descriptions of the f/f sex was awesome. I'll admit, I got a bit flustered myself a couple times reading this. I guess I'll have to make a clop folder to put this into. Good job with this, it was a really enjoyable read. :twilightsmile:

I love the idea of this having a continuation into a ship fic!! Especially because friends with benefits can be turned into some interesting drama!! Would totally love to see this continued into a full blown shipfic!

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Thank you! I always try to have an impactful ending and as soon as I started the sex part I thought "applejack totally hears the whole thinng." I'm glad someone else appreciates the accidental cuckage. I'm definitely glad to hear the work is delicious and adorable. And don't worry, it's definitely seeming to me like people want more PinkieDash and I'm getting a few ideas on things to do with them. There will be more, mark my words... eventually...

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Thanks ^.^ I don't either (in fact the only clopfic I've ever read and not hated with the pones is A Lesson In Preening, and a few EqG/human ones that were mostly SunLight and they were each upwards of 10K of plot and stuff before the sex and I skimmed the sex when I got there. Honestly my biggest thing is it doesn't happen how I would do it, you know? Anyway yeah, PinkieDash FTW and I'm glad you liked it. And uh, I'm glad that my descriptions weren't terrible. I don't really have any experience with vaginal stimulation so I'm surprised to hear it was flustering. Mission accomplished :D

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Th8ks

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I've got some other projects in the way incoming first, but it'll be on the to-do list. I'm actually a fan of the friends with benefits arrangement and sort of have one myself, so I've got no shortage of inspo to draw from. [although my guy is a man rather than a teenage girl but it's not too different]. Regardless it'll come eventually.

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I'll see your Danny Devito and raise you
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Also look me in the eyes and tell me that Pinkamena Diane Pie doesn't use 'XD' unironically.

A fellow maggot I see?
excellent story btw keep it up!👍

“Omg Dashie XD”

I fell in love with this story right here.

This is some amazing PinkieDash. And they both feel like themselves, which is a solid win for you.

I like me some clop (and your clop is great here, btw), but the story stands on it’s own without it. Take it completely out, and you still have a nice story between Pinkie and Rainbow. And I love your characterization of Pinkie’s Puritan upbringing. It’s an angle that I don’t see much of, but it makes so much sense.

This story gets a like and a fave from me.

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Just out of interest, are you still thinking of writing more Pinke and Dash stuff, cause those two are my absolute faves and it would be incredible to see more <3

Tf you mean “She would never admit it but she thought Pinkie had the best boobs in all of Canterlot high... besides Principal Celestia”

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I mean that Rainbow thinks that Celestia has a supremely nice set of honkers

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