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Such A Chlorbag


Sweetie Belle in the streets, Scootaloo in the sheets.

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Pinkie Pie has been dating Rainbow Dash for three months now and she couldn't be happier. There was only one problem: Why couldn't she tell anyone? When that question is left unanswered, Pinkie is forced to wonder why they are in a relationship at all.

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Nice job! Loved the pace and the style, Pinkie was written in character and the detail of the scenery was awesome! Keep writing!

6824465 Aw, thank you so much!

6824900 Thought I'd give such things a try for once. Thanks for reading!

Very well done. Pinkie and Dash were excellent and felt in character. I like that this did not go the standard route of Dash being too embarrassed to tell her friends or that she was afraid that they would not accept the relationship. We get a lot of those so a short story about Dash being so unsure of her own worth (which fits what we find in the show at times) makes for a nice change of pace.

Thanks for writing a nice PinkieDash story.

6825470 Well thank you! It's nice to hear that I'm slightly almost original. :pinkiehappy:

*Applause*

This has to be one of my favorites! The characterization, the dialogue, the fluff, everything. Bravo!

:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

6827136 Wow! Thank you so much! I aim to please.

This has given me so much fuzzy feeling!!! Love this story!!:heart:

6921944 My God, you're right! Thank you for pointing all of those out to me! I didn't even ask, so thank you very much for helping me with my story, let alone reading it. Consider them fixed. And thanks for liking my story, that's very sweet of you! You are very kind, and you're a friend of a friend so that's extra points in my book!

:rainbowkiss: This was so adorablely awesome! I loved every little thing about it! Bravo, you've earned yourself a fave! :pinkiehappy:

7964602 Thank you very much! You filled out my notifications!

7965107 It's what I do best. :rainbowlaugh: I have way too many shelves... I have one for almost every tag. :derpytongue2: That's what happens when I sort things.

HNNNGG THAT WAS SO CUTE

I love pinkiedash damn much, and it really doesn't get enough love.

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I agree!!! And thank you!

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