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JibJibMonkey


"Don't live life by the years, live life by how good each year is" -Kevin Pelletier (JibJibMonkey)

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Rainbow Dash has had a crush on Pinkie Pie for a while and wants to confess her love for her, but her nerves are preventing her from doing so. She has to find some way to tell Pinkie without embarrassing herself.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Short and simple, just the way I like it.:pinkiesmile:
My only problem with this story is the Dusk seems like a Mary Sue. Sorry if I sound mean.

Its alright bro. I just wanted to just put Dusk (aka my oc) into the story.

Eh. It was too short or my liking and Dusk felt mary sueish but it includes PinkieDash so i'll give it a thumbs up. Just not a favorite.

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I can respect that criticism, thanks:twilightsmile:. I'm going to redo the story anyways.

Awwwe, I love such a cute RainbowPie stories like this :heart::pinkiesmile: Great Job!

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Thank you very much. It's one of my favorite ships and it was the first story I made. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's been a while since I got a comment on this story. So once again thank you.

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