Became a brony after reluctantly watching the first two episodes with a friend. Absolutely love this show.
Pinkie Pie has fallen in love with Rainbow and has been following Rainbow Dash everywhere she went! At first Rainbow liked the admiration and support but after a while it was starting to get weird. Will Rainbow return Pinkie Pie’s feelings?
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Looks good, I'll wait a few more chapters until I start reading it.
7480313 Oh thank you! Me and my friend are working hard to keep the chapters coming, but she has her own projects so some chapters may be a little delayed!
7480449 Every good thing takes time, just try and not rush chapters. Anyway I'll be looking forward to more,
7480472 Thanks! I was afraid nopony was gonna like it! So truly thank you for the kind words!
You have done well for a first story. he more fluid the writing gets teh better the chapter becomes. This will come the more you write so keep it up. I always enjoy a good PinkieDash so I will keep an eye for this.
7481627 thank you so much for the kind words!!
Well! It looks like a good start so far. ^^ Hopefully things will end well.
Suggestions:
Might wanna italicize the character's thoughts. Trust me, mate, it looks a lot more cleaner, along with the fact it helps the readers a whole lot more.
Since Rainbow is speaking, put a comma before the dialogue begins. Same with all the other ones.
But besides that, I'll be keeping an eye on this, definetly has some potential.
7483389 Thank you so much i will fix those right away! And thank you for not being mean about it!
7482684 Thanks for comment! All the support is really boosting my confidence to write more! So really thank you for the positive feedback!
This is pretty good. There aren't enough RainbowPie stories.
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Why thank you sir! I really appreciate it. And if you like this one you should check out Pink Rainbow by Wings Pony! She is an amazing writer and great friend!
OMFG!! AN UPDATE!??!! OMGOMGOMGOMG MUST GO READ!!! -goes off to read-
MOAR SOON PLEASE!!!! RAINBOW IS WARMING UP TO PINKIE I KNOW IT!!!
8306118 Thank you so much!!!
and Maybe, I dunno 
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I know what that wink means... but seriously. Keep it up, I hope this updates regularly!
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I'm going to try but no promises!! alot of it has to do with hectic scheldules of both me and my co-writer
It looks great!