Apogee is about to ace her English class's final exam. As long as she can manage to get through the rest of the test without thinking about the weekend she just spent at her dad's, and the hot, steamy romp they had...
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we've all been there.
Great job
Well... it just Gets better and better doesn't it? Still surprised this family hasn't torn itself apart more and more. Anyhow, I look forward to reading this
Not quite sure how that typo happened.
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Honestly that could have been my auto correct or my tired mind... Either way thanks for the catch!
Nice!
That's one lf the best things a fan can hear from a creator! Inspiration is such a rare event, one can't but appreciate when it decides to manifest. If your last ApoJet works are any indication, future's looking pretty awesome.
With that said, this comment-size fic was enjoyable on its own and makes for a lighter read when one is pressed for time.
Well, Apogee, looks like the ride never ends!
Also, is it sad I saw this fic coming a mile away when that image went up on Derpi? It was pure Clopfic material.
Wow, that was quick. XDDD
Nice!! Good job
no 'Please Mrs. Kindnicker, don't give me an F, I'll take the D any-day'
0/10
u fuking disgust me again
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Lol what?
...Peyton Manning?
lol wut
these are some neat typos i tell ya
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Fixed! Thanks for the spots!!
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Ahhh... What!? For some reason when I first read this comment all I saw was 0/10 and below....
This makes much more sense, lol!
Apogee has got to be one of the most adorable, and horny, fillies I’ve seen yet!
She is quickly becoming a favourite.
me gusta
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Thanks! You'll be seeing a lot from her, there's a whole gang of great writers and rtists having a blast with her and her family's back story right now!
Wow Apogee. Just, wow. Those last few lines. We all know what she's thinking.
I love those Apogee/Delta Vee/Jet Stream stories.
Are you planning to make more of those btw??
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I am extremely close to finishing the last chapter of Any Landing which is Jet x Apogee
Huh... Neat end
A short one!
They're cute and they're badass.
It's not an essay but then this is a speedfic.
Kids these days with their cylindrical pencils. Back in my day, our pencils were shaped like bricks!
Add a comma after small.
Her parents have completely ruined this girl... Add a comma after still.
Aaand I'm dead. You not only are the master of the drumfire, but you can also play sniper. This one paragraph — this image of a physically exhausted young girl being fucked by her Dad for god only knows how long until she slides down a staircase covered in their shared love batter before collapsing is the single most fucked up image you have ever put in my head.
Well done sir. Have another upvote.
Seeping you mean.
Just another day living in the South unless you're in late summer. We never get rain in late summer.
Why has this girl not been taking away from her parents yet? Holy hell!
I'll have to ask Dirty Little Secret some time. That poor bastard actually had to do it 165 times! Actually, I wonder how Apogee's essay would be scored by DLS? Hmm...
Notes: Not a single correct sentence.
Quite alluring as I could imagine how all those dicks could be put to good use even if they never were.
Minimalistic but pacing issues kept me from appreciating this fully.
Dicks.
Immersion: 3
Allure: 55
Enticement: 7
Prose: 1
Cloppability: 16
Final score: 83/500
We're all going to die down here...
Good show, old bean. Good show.
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Haha, this was one of the few times I actually copied a fic from the comments of derpibooru that is written and posted it to fimfic.