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Broman


A guy who loves to create stories and has a big imagination. Also wishes to become a famous Actor and Director.

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Starswirl the Bearded is a powerful wielder of magic, who for many years has safeguarded the realm of Equestria. From treating different nations, teaching the princesses, to facing horrible magical creatures of the land, he has seen it all. However, on one fateful day, his life would change. During a raid against trappers he discovered three small children and he knew of what they are. Knowing the risk they would bring he knew what dangers they possessed to Equestria.

Yet, how could he do his duty for his country when they were the last of their kind?

Update: The update is a new picture that was created by the ever talented Skecchiart. Do go check him out, because he is awesome.

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I need to see this as a proper mini-series! This is too good to pass up!.

Reading this makes the fact that star swirl banshing them in the show seem supper depressin:fluttercry:

Comment posted by GamePlayer64 deleted Nov 3rd, 2017

I can see it now, Starswirl the Bearded, World’s Worst Adopted Father

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In what way was he the worst adopted father?
Please explain, because im curious.

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Banishing his adopted daughters to a parallel world.

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If this story was remotely canon, he probably did it because he cared too much for them to either kill them like he originally thought to do, or because he probably grounded them.

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My best guess is that He lied & hid their true race and selves from them.

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I actually love that reasoning.
I can imagine them growing up trying to hide what they are and feeling conflicted whenever they did something Siren-like and it felt right versus doing things the pony way and it is completely unnatural for them. And with nature being stronger than nurture in this case, they eventually grow to become the threat everypony know them to be. Starswirl being conflicted between duty and family, compromises to banish them to a world where magic is non-existent (at the time) and conflict was natural to allow his surrogate family to live without them being able to cause mass extinction.

I hope that Storm Rage dies a horrifying, agonizing death.

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You're most welcome. Thank you for the follow as well. :twilightsmile:

This story was adorable and a great read it would be awesome to read a sequale and dont feel rushed to do it

What did the other Pillars of Equestria have to say to this?

I say go for it and still keeping about my last commit; Starswirl, Worst Father in Existence

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Thanks for that. I might actually something with this when I get the chance, since school and whatnot, but I will see what I can come up with.
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I'll do it!
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Maybe I'll think about it when I make the sequel. :twilightsmile:
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You never know until you read into it.
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I will.
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Sure thing.

Like I said this will be completely different then this story but I got a feeling it's going to be to everyone's liking.

Will there be a Sonata is just misguided retcon?

Oh, if only...:fluttercry:

Astounding work, mate, astounding.

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If only what, If I might ask?

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This happened in Canon, things might not have turned out the way they did for the Dazzlings.

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That why I made the squeal. Which will have a little bit human look to it.

I have to say, the picture used for that story is very cute, and befitting. Little Sonata is adorable.

This is such an interesting concept.

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