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Broman


A guy who loves to create stories and has a big imagination. Also wishes to become a famous Actor and Director.

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This story is a sequel to The Sorcerer and the Sirens


Jack Jensen is a simple man like any other. He lives in an apartment in New York City, has small part time jobs, and the biggest thing he has to take care of his beloved dog at home. However, on one fateful night, he would find a strange girl collapsed upon the cold cement in front of his apartment building. Feeling obligated in helping her, he brings her into his apartment.

Who knew that in helping her it would change his life for the better. Even if there were a few hiccups along the way.

Rated Teen or Pg-13, for some Sexual References and Content, language, and some Mild Crude Humor.

This story is a bit of a Sequel from the Sorcerer and The Sirens.

This is a brand spanking new story of mine everyone. Be sure to give me feedback on what you think. If you down vote this story then please leave a comment so that I can understand the reason and be able to improve my work.

Cover art is created by TurnipBerry. One fantastic artist that I think many of you should check out.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 23 )

Very interested in this!

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Thanks. There is a lot more to this story so do keep an eye out. :twilightsmile:

Wow, he is a fun guy and the interactions here show the timeline are rather different than original.

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There is a lot more to this so be sure to keep an eye out.

Edit: I just realized that I just copied the same deal as of last time. :facehoof:

What I mean to say thanks for liking Jack in this story. The timelines are different but having a human world feel to the story makes it more unique in my opinion.

This is just so dang adorable at times!

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Thank you. I do try and make Sonata and her interactions with others fun. :twilightsmile:

I dont know if you are still updating this story or not but let me just say that I am enjoying this so far. I just love jack and sonata's dynamic, and adding mama June's sass to the mix gives this story a light hearted and satisfying flavor. So far, my taste buds crave for more.

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Thanks for that. Also, the new chapter, is coming sooner then you think.

Ouch, things going to be rough for our boy now.

…...shit sonata what did you do?

A single handgun and cartridges holder for the gun.

Huh? :rainbowderp: "Cartridges holder?"

It was a Korth super sport, a nighthawk custom that was capable of firing of .375 magnum bullets.

Ah. You mean a speed loader. Something tells me you're not really familiar with firearms or you got a little confused. The .375 Magnum is a high powered rifle cartridge. Trying to use that in a revolver like the Korth SS would make it blow up in your hands. The Korth fires .357 Magnum. Next time, look something like that up to make sure you got it right. Remember, Google is your friend! :twilightsmile:

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There is is magic in the air. :raritywink:

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Thanks for the correction and I made the changes. I kept thinking about those classic magnum gun or the smith and wesson style guns. But when I saw the model for the Korth it looked really cool so I used that instead for the story. But I guess there was confusion on my part so thanks for that. :twilightsmile: Though I had to look up and see what the magazine size it would be. Kept thinking those hundred round bullets in those clear boxes in my head but I didn't know what it would be carried for those small ammunition or the right name for it. Unless you would now what I'm talking about. :twilightsheepish:

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By clear boxes, do you mean the .22lr and magnum ammo from CCI? That's the only company I know that packages ammunition like that and they don't sell .357 Magnum in clear boxes. Go with a company that is relatively well known, like Hornady, Remington, Fiocchi, or Federal. Also, the Korth SS is a revolver, and revolvers don't take magazines. The closest thing to a magazine that a revolver could take is a half or full moon clip, but the Korth SS can't use those, so don't even include it. Like I said, do a little bit of research if you're unfamiliar subject.

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Understood. Thanks for letting me know about that. I'll be sure to study them before I decide to put those in. I'll be sure to make the change that its clips in the future chapters.

So far I quite like this. Might want a proof reader, or to just go back and read through it to find small errors, but hell of a good story.

Any updates to the story soon. I'm really liking what I read so far due to my work life

This is a fairly enjoyable story. I hope to see new chapters start up again.

“I’m going to have to sell my body, am I?” she asked honestly.

The answer was so unexpected that he snorted and spat milk gloriously onto the table.

I had the exact same reaction, only with water instead of milk. 😂

Are you still alive? I would love for this to get updated, your story is amazing! 😄

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