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Pinkamena666
Just a dude who writes mainly clop with some action and some GrimDark on the side. Also, If you don’t like futa, you may have a bad time here :P ;)
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8333831
Yay! First comment!
Also, glad ya like it so far ^_^ I'm actually writing chapter 2 for both now. The condition for having these to versions is I have to update them simultaneously :P
So....first chapter up time to review....pacing is a bit fast and there is a light form of characterization, which would be fine for a comic book which is a visual medium....Not a written medium. That being said where you need characterization you do provide enough to at least allow us to know the characters and world.
And that combines for the t-rated version to, though to be fair at this moment having read both I think the T-rated is better atm. The sex is....light for now. For something rated X I expected more. Still this is chapter one I'll hold out on that getting better.
6.5/10 with ALOT of room for improvement
Not bad
I’m enjoying this. The relationship is cute and I can’t wait to see where this goes.
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I am concerned about the pacing though Sanguine. It feels pretty rushed, it's fine other than that.
8362373
I agree it does feel a tad rushed, still enjoyable though.
8362785
Yeah, it's not a big issue now. Later has me concerned though. I may be a little oversensitive to it given the problems I have had with this particular issue too.
Oh and I do like the comic book approach to the story. I have not seen that until now.
8362797
I happen to appreciate the comic book-ness of it too.
8362799
Yeah it's really unique isn't it?
8362804
Indeed
8362806
wow.
Oooh I like this a lot. Following.
8333837
You must update! Not only as a clop semi lover, but as a superhero fan.
I’m still holding onto hope that you’ll continue this story. I’m interested in it, but you haven’t updated it in two years. Could you at least mark it as On Hiatus, if not Canceled?
It's very unfortunate that this story, and the entire project, was abandoned. I know you have things you're more interested in, so I completely understand. It's just, you know, disappointing.
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I wouldn’t say abandoned
10939432
Perhaps. In my experience, spending time away from a project decreases the likelihood of me continuing it, but I can imagine it is different for everyone. Still, four years is a long time to wait without getting disheartened.
Now this is interesting. I have always wanted to write a Power Ponies fanfic using Gen 4 ponies. But with this, I think I can help in creating the characters n writing a plot for this. That is if u accept my help. Also glad to know there’s a Celestia n Luna in this fanfic. Can’t wait to use them for sex. Hope to hear from u soon whether I can help or not. N get back to writing this soon.