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DwarvishPony


Wanna chat video games or story ideas? I'll always take the time to chat! Feel free to PM me or find me on the FimFiction Discord. I also do prereading work if you need it!


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A lone pony breaks loose from her imprisonment, bent on freedom. All she has to do is avoid any guards looking for her and brave the dangerous terrain. Simple, right?

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If this were any other story, I'd tell you that the escape would require some more description to add to the building tension. But given the plot-twist, what you now have there is more than enough! :trollestia:
Nice, funny and unexpected afternoon read, thank you for that! :pinkiehappy:

This was too friggin good! I love it.

This was pretty cute, I'm glad I didn't look at the character tags. Normally I would say that a story would work better with a bit more depth to it, but this one was just right. Have a like!

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