The Escape of a Lifetime

A lone pony breaks loose from her imprisonment, bent on freedom. All she has to do is avoid any guards looking for her and brave the dangerous terrain. Simple, right?

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EverfreePony

EverfreePony #1 · Jun 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

If this were any other story, I'd tell you that the escape would require some more description to add to the building tension. But given the plot-twist, what you now have there is more than enough!
Nice, funny and unexpected afternoon read, thank you for that!

AdmiralPopeyesBeard

AdmiralPopeyesBeard #2 · Jun 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

This was too friggin good! I love it.

Lucky Seven

Lucky Seven #3 · Jun 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

This was pretty cute, I'm glad I didn't look at the character tags. Normally I would say that a story would work better with a bit more depth to it, but this one was just right. Have a like!

KamikazeKawaii