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PixelMoon


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Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy have been great friends for a while now. When they are alone, it gets awkward. Pinkie Pie realizes that she may like Fluttershy. She has to find a way to win her heart.

She manages to convince Fluttershy to go on a date with her. But will she realize that she may like Pinkie Pie too?

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Comments ( 8 )

It was very cute and funny. I had a great time, good job.

This story has potential. I'm not at my computer ATM, so I'll give you an in depth analysis later. For starting out writing fanfics, not bad.

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Thank you for your feedback.:twilightsmile:

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Hello, dear sister!

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You know, I came back to this story and saw your comment. You never did give your "later feedback".

I love PinkieShy, and this was cute. I feel that Fluttershy's "resistance" when Pinkie asked her out, and on the date, was more her shy nerves getting the better of her.

As much as I would like to see the story from Fluttershy's point of view, the mystery of it is, well, nice.

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