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You sure it's little one not little ones?
Don't you mean the other kind?
Is it dead?
I can't wait for the next update is good
Dead??
The idea in the description was good but seems to be poorly executed. Needs more time spent on the title being the Griffin Law of fighting and claiming your mate. Needs more build of there for more of this to be enjoyable if it ever comes back.
More?
Please continue this story!
Great work
You claim this is edited
But it reads like a first draft, or maybe a second.
The many, many grammatical and spelling errors detract from what is, overall, a very interesting and entertaining story.
To summarize, this is good, but it could be great.
very nice.
Do you intend to continue?