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Outdoor Theater movie show them Star Wars and Lord of the Rings

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Dog, get out of my head. I had that exact thing planned. Well, more so showing the lord of the rings than star wars.

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I wonder if any Mares are going to get a crush on Aragon

I got a strong idea you got the story from and I wonder who's going to hook up with you and when we're Gilda is going to show up if the twins are going to go to school make sure the father checks the educational system here's a quote there's nothing more dangerous to a free Nation people's empowers believe they are above the law all them self makes you one of them ask that questions

I wonder what the doctor results are going to be with the male seed let them refuse the send friendship report to Celestia since they are not citizens she has no authority over them keep up the good work

First you mad me very hungry number two I told you was true from a certain point of view number three get rid of Mythic Entry

Where did you get the cover art?

Angie literally the person I hate the most in the story she just keeps making things worse everybody else is just fine

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Well I don't know about you, but if I was transported to a random world had my home broken into and then kidnapped, and then had a member of my family attacked under the pretense of a "joke", I would react the exact same way, and it would be "K.O.S." for that prismatic prick rainbow dash 😡

What's the dark tag for?

Oh you got a drunk child that's a funny ending can't wait to see Gilda in the story and she does when she see the humans or Zecora

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It will make sense later down the line.

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Going to make the humans suffer more and let the Ponies not regretting it?

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Nothing like that. That happens way to often with little pay off. There be equal parts suffering on both sides.

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Just hope the Princesses aren't blatantly bigoted as well. Or blind to see the obvious mistreatment atleast.

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Angie literally the person I hate the most in the story she just keeps making things worse everybody else is just fine

To be fair, there is always that one person in every group. When I was a teen, my group of friends had Frank, and Frank was always the one person who could be counted on to make a bad situation worse. It was like a super power he had. He just instinctively always knew the worst possible thing to say in any situation and he was never able to not say it.

Monk
"The idea simply stated that when personal feelings are mixed with power, bad things happen." -Corvo

Ok, I just now caught up and I have to say that I both like and hate this story. It''s a dam good story and it's kept my interest, but at the same time, It really grinds my gears how nothing these ponies are doing are coming back to haunt them. I truly dislike situations where nasty people get away with being nasty with no consequences. Its far too much like how the real world works for my liking.

There is a meme here on this site where the ponies are vicious, racist, malicious and nasty to a human or humans and the human turns around and saves that ponies life like a great big hero. I hope to god that this Author does not put that into this story, because I will fling my monitor through my wall.

Bad guys should get what they deserve, not be forgiven and hugged because so many of us on this site suffer from Stockholm syndrome.

As irate as the ponys treatment of the humans in this story makes me, I look forward to seeing where this great Author takes us next.

Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze

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I completely agree with you she's making everything worse every time she's the only character absolutely hate

If I was Pinky I would have thrown twilight's logic back at her face by saying. Then in that case Twilight you should throw spike out for being a dragon and unlike the humans Spike actually has done something wrong because he was a dragon remember his birthday:pinkiecrazy:

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It wouldn't make sense for the princesses to be racist. we don't know when exactly the princesses were born but we could guess it was around the era of the three tribes so they were around not only to hear but also see the damage racism and hate cause

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We haven’t gotten to that point yet but that is good for future context. Thanks.

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Cool and thanks for listening 😊 .Wait I just thought something going by how these ponies are shouldn't Spike also face discrimination as well for being a dragon and I want to make this clear not by celestial or Twilight or shining armor or their parents but other ponies especially in cantalot

Humans are not perfect, and ole sunbutt want to capitalize on the bad instead of the good.

Even more examples of fuck the humans.

Humans are second class and they own nothing and if they do own something, its of no value what so ever.

I don't like that the only advantage that the humans have, their privacy is now gone.

What do they even have left anymore?

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The problem is that ponies are trying to act like most of the time, they themselves aren't acting and things exactly like how humans are doing crap, like breaking in their homes, imprisoning without evidence, even hitting kids without mercy nust because they can.

Hell I'm pretty sure that half the stories about humans are just exacerbated stories ponies made because they like to make EVERYTHING a big deal. It's also most likely all of this, just like with One Step Forward fic, that the whole thing about humanity, ie a bit personal with Celestia.

I knew those rocks were suspicious yeah put them in each other's rooms at all

"Hehe, right, I suppose you already know that. But I feel I must reiterate the joy of bringing these humans here. You can't see their destinies like your other creations. They belong to that other deity! Their mere presence is one big box of chocolates; you never know what you're going to get!"

"My Faithful Student, as you may already be aware, there was a massive magical disturbance during the night. Being alicorns, both Luna and I are more in tune with our world's mana way lines. Both of us were able to deduce that something has pierced through the veil and entered our plane. This event is a matter of grave concern. Only a being of great magical prowess could perform such a feat. My researchers here in Canterlot are doing all they can to solve this phenomenon. I seek your aid, as well. The device I sent along with this letter will aid you in locating the source of the disturbance. You may also bring along any pony you deem suitable. However, I must stress that you cannot engage whatever you may find, only observe and report. Your findings will dictate how we shall proceed in handling this matter. Be cautious in this endeavor, Twilight.

Comment posted by Artich deleted Jan 7th, 2023

"You mean what will Donnie do when they find the empty plate on his bed!" Nattie looked at me like I grew a zit before smiling. We both got to work eating the cake like crazy. It was so good that I didn't want it to end. But then something happened I didn't account for, and that was the sound of the kitchen door opening. I stopped eating while Nattie and I looked at each other. The cake was half gone, and the fridge was wide open. We were going to get caught!

"Provide they don't catch us first. STAY AWAY FROM the US, YOU BRUTES!!!"

All of us recoiled at that. Twilight was trying and failing to formulate a response. I looked to my aunts, but once again, they were only absorbing what we are saying. "It is never ok anypony to broke the law!" I spoke firmly and authoritatively.

What?

I beamed with joy as we were finally making some progress. "What can you two you do?" Cecelia asked Aunties Celestia and Luna.

"That is a mistake I made in the past. You said as much yourself, captain, There is nothing outright suspicious, but there is suspicion, correct?" I was hesitant at first before I nodded. "Then we shall remain vigilant. However, we must bring this to a close. Sheriff Handbook! Please bring Princess Cadance back along with the final human,"

Judging by the bashful smile, Cecelia was telling the truth. "Interesting. How did you know Miss Pinkie Pie was in the kitchen, Cecelia?" It is such a joy watching her freeze up like that. I walked over to the tray and presented it to the group. "If I recall, it was Donatello that eate my cake. Except, there are two small handprints on the tray. Fancy that," By this time, I turned and faced my grandkids with the tray and the evidence facing them. "Cecelia. How did you know Pinkie was eating my cake?"

"Dear Angie, Hiya. I'm Pinkie Pie. When my friends and I broke into your home and kind of/sort of foalnapped you and your friends, we met. Then, we met again in your cell. And we'll meet again, again tomorrow! Only this time, nopony is going to pass out unless they're too tired to get up from all the partying we're going to do! I wanted to tell you that the other hue-mins are safe and that I'm sorry I can't give a proper Pinkie Pie welcome party until tomorrow. I mean, seriously? That's practically a crime in itself. Anywho, please enjoy this delicious, super tasty Sweetie glazed cake on me!

"It's alright, Miss Heartstrings. I can tell you didn't mean it," Nana Kingston said. She pulled Nattie over and examined her arm. "It's nothing some ointment work help won't fix. But, please be more mindful when it comes to my girls,"

Lyra nods her head so fast that I swore the color bled out of her face or muzzle. It looked like she was bout to start crying until Nattie hugged her. Lyra hugged her back, and it was lovely. Out of all the ponies here, I'm glad the twins can feel safe with a few of them, Even if it is only Lyra and Pinkie right now. The little moment was short-lived as Dr. Horse cleared his throat. "While this is all lovely, we should begin. Although would one of you mind finding the vein again?"

"What?" I asked. I watched the human pour a bowl of malted oats and bring it to me.

Honestly this a pretty good story

I love this I hope the story continues

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