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I think... there is more to this story...
7974243 I got that feeling, too, but my sister told me that was kinda the point (she loves making most of her stories and short tales like that). She likes MLP FIM a lot, but this could technically be her first fic, since about 80% of it is her idea. She doesn't hate Celestia, but neither likes her.
7974448 And I have a character that could reveal more of this story.
7974473 PM me, please. Sounds interesting.
.... I made the mistake of looking at the comments and now I'm extremely unsure of reading this since that has ALL the call signs of a Celestia bash story..... like about 75% of this site's stories do.
BAH!!!! SequAL!!!!!
a sequel?
7974516 Yeah, it's pretty much Celestia bashing, and not even good bashing either. It's like civilian council bashing in Naruto fanfics. It made Celestia hilariously over the top evil in the past, yet she's a complete wimp and folds over like wet toilet paper in the present. Here's a brief snippet.
Sorry Ekhidna, normally I like your stories, but I had to give this a down vote. I absolutely hate stories that exist just to bash a single character.
7974448 Why does your sister not like Celestia?
7974906 Same here. I REALLY love a good number of of his stories.... just for me he kinda hit a miss.
7975091 Well, to be fair, he did say that most of this fic came from his sister, so there's that.
7975162 Eh.
7974495 I sent you a PM.
7974973 She sees Celestia as a useless character, in her opinion, that has never been given time to shine or show more about herself. Her favorite character is Applejack, by the way. And the character she hates the most is a tie between Zephyr and Shining Armor.
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Yeah, I know, most of "my" worst stories aren't mine at all, or most of the idea comes from a friend or in this case, my sister. During the special event I was kinda hoping people would choose number 2 or number 3 since those were entirely my ideas, but oh well, no one can ever hit gold all the time!
7975575 I get ya.
7975575 I can tell. This is very different from your usual (high quality) writing. Tough luck, I suppose.
7975575 ......but I voted #2.........bitch.
7975568 Got it. What does she have against Shinning Armor?
7975910 I know, but numbah 1 won in the end.
7976020 I won't even begin to go into that, I'm just going to say that she will refuse to read ANY fic if it even mentions Shining Armor. She considers Shining to be, and I quote, "The most useless and wimpiest stallion, ever." And yes, she hates Shining even more than Zephyr (imagine her joy when Zephyr was introduced, I can still hear her screams of rage)
7976179 huh, that just makes me want a fic where shining trains spike to be a soldier. A brutal but effective training regime. Then, at the graduation, I want shining to give spike a tired look, and say "that was the single most difficult thing I have ever done."
Spike shoots him a skeptical smile. " really? Didn't seem that way whenever you screamed in my face or destroyed me everytime I made a mistake."
Shinning smiled wistfully before throwing an arm over spikes shoulder. "Spike. Little bro. We're family. I never, ever want to hurt you. Any of you. I joined the guard, to protect, to do the hard things 'for' other ponies. Ponies like you and twilight. So when I had to, tear you down, to break you, make you doubt every move you'd make, instead of protecting and encouraging you. Every time, it was so hard to do, little bro."
Spike stared into Shining’s gaze, before squeezing him tight.
"Love you big bro."
"You too, bro."
7976508 Muh heart.
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Celestia has such a cool story that was never told.
I hate celestia bashing.
7976179 Wow, why do you think she thinks that?
7977048 Dunno, really. Although, I suspect I may influence her a little bit on that aspect. She absolutely adores Big Mac, while she hates Shining and Zephyr with the passion of a thousand Hypernovae.
7977071 I finally got around to reading this yay for me. But I wanted to ask if there will be a sequel or no?
7977071 Does she find Big Mac more masculine or something?
7977194 Depends on my sister more than me, so who knows?
7977590 She tends to compare them to me. SO there's that.
7977936 Are you more like Big Mac?
7979506 Well, basically I'm her hero and looks up to me (and only close related family left, and she's mine). She sees a bit of me in Big Mac, while she sees the opposite of me on Shining. And Zephyr, well, it's Zephyr.
7979547 Got it. How old is your sister, if I may ask?
7981660 Fifteen.
7981707 Got it. How old are you?
7981780 27
7981805 Got it.
sequel please.
Well, I can understand why this fic was written.
Me personally though? I kinda dislike her? I mean, she's supposed to be this benevolent ruler but she's never really done anything useful when something truly important threatens her kingdom, leaving Twilight to clean up the mess that Celestia really should have some responsibility for. That kind of character quickly loses respect when they do nothing meaningful despite the fact that they should be the first to.
Sequel?
Is it weird that when i heard the description of Bahamut i was think of anthro version of Vaal hazak
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Not at all.