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Oh, it's such a perfect day...


On a day like any other, one of Jupiter's moons—Europa—appears above Equus.

And it's going to hit

With the clock ticking, Princess Cadance must find out why it's here, and if there's any way to stop it from obliterating all life on Equus.

Proofread by James Fire in the comments section.

Written in celebration of hitting 100 followers.

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Comments ( 20 )

I restate my original comment: wat.

7789287 All will be explained...

Never. :pinkiecrazy:

“I let lonely when I'm not promoting my new theory.”

I let lonely too! I feel for you man.

7789308 Same, bruh.

(Thanks for pointing out the typo. :derpytongue2:)

7789289 Yay! Mindf**** for everyone!

Four minutes later, the carriage landed outside an octagon-shaped house that was painted a mixture of purple and green. Outside it was lemon yellow coated unicorn stallion,

Perhaps there was a lemon-coated unicorn stallion?

7789320 ... Now I just feel silly. Thank you.

As the adviser rattled off the dozens if issues Cadance had to deal with

Love the stress of dozens if issues in the morning.

7789332 ... You're getting a proof-reading credit now.


Meaning what?

7789337 You're mentioned in the story description! \o/

Cool. Onwards to typo destruction!:pinkiecrazy:

She should have just let it be over

Reading it a second time brings more typos...

Doom Sayer smirked stood up.

He did what now?

He tried over to Cadance and pressed his muzzle up against hers.


7789746 Fixed both. :raritywink: Though, if you may, please send any other typos you find via PM so you don't fill up the comments section.

Fine, but I usaually just put them all in one comment, like I do in Alzrius' story. Pm it is.

True One: I literally don't know what I should expect from this story, but, it probably fills my need for a random story about a random setup.

Me while Laughing: What the hell did I just Read? :rainbowlaugh:

That was... odd. And stupid. In a random way. I'm not sure what else there is to say! :derpytongue2:

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