A little known fact about Derpy Hooves is that she has been keeping a diary ever since she learned to write. Spread out through several volumes, she has documented the various ups and downs of her life so that she may reflect on them. Derpy's diary tells a long story of positives, negatives, and the occasional tragedy. But through it all, Derpy always manages to find the light at the end of the tunnel.
Adorable! Need more!
OMG this is way better than my Derpy story! Please update soon! Following ya!
Will Dinky appear?
7730085 I haven't written that far ahead yet, but yes.
Poor Derpy...
Hopefully things get better
'Um Mr. Foxhelm'
Yes...
"Muffins?"
Yes, Thank you, Derpy
10/10
i think im going to cry.img09.deviantart.net/6156/i/2012/365/1/e/sad_filly_derpy___vector_by_agamnentzar-d5prxgf.png
Of course! If that series existed in MLP, this is how it would be done
Brighteyes (yes that's what I am calling her) has such a big heart...I just...just
This is amazing! I can't wait to see where it goes from here. The innocence in the writing is impressive, you did it really well!
Would you consider adding this story to some groups? I think it's superb, but I fear not many people have noticed it I think there are some Derpy groups out there where it might fit in?
7890379 I've been meaning to do that. Thanks for reminding me
Yay for update! And poor Derpy, posting her bits away. Lovely to see her friendship with Bon Bon, though, and so sweet that she'll be going to stay with her in Ponyville for a week.
Really enjoyed reading this
Time Turner and Derpy make such a cute couple.
Why isn't there a sad tag?
8178258 Added one.
Welcome home, Derpy
This final chapter was magnificently good. I liked the explanations for all her different names, and the foals she's sometimes seen with. Sad she and Bon Bon didn't reconnect though. I laughed at this line:
And then the last few entries, and the gradual change of direction there, they were really touching to read.
Good job!
Maybe one last entry, years later by Dinky, saying 'thanks for being there for Mommy'
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I might add a bonus chapter at some point.
Me after reading about Sky Writer and Derpy's Mom and everyone who's kicked her to the curb so far:
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Loving this so far! Glad Derpy's out of that Tartarus-hole of an original home.
And so beings the great friendship of Ditzy Doo and Doctor Who–I mean, Time Turner. Yeah.
Also, jerk move from Ditzy's Mom. Hope she gets some comeuppance at some point.
Oh, snap.
And so it begins. :)
Finally finished reading this. This was so good! I love seeing or reading stories about how all the characters we know met one another. I almost cried a few times!
This is definitely going into my favorites. Well done!