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Teyeson Bee


"Something random a day keeps the boring away." - Teyeson Bee

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This is the story of a young girl who had given up all hope. After being born with a deformity, was mocked for it, and losing both her parents, she was left with nothing but dark clouds of depression and sadness.

But when a young man with the hope of a sunny day comes into her life, she might come to see that when dark clouds come our way, the best thing to do is to look toward the silver lining.

This is the story of Derpy.

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Comments ( 30 )

daaaaaaawwwwwwww ;-; i cryyyyy everytime

STOP PLAYING WITH MMEH FEELS MAN!!!!!!! T.T

Why do I like to make myself cry.. I don't know... :fluttercry: so sad

A big smile is now stuck on my face. Can't wait for more! :derpytongue2:

wow know one read this im guessing but it is a good story im cry right now

this felt right so i added this music

derpy is one of my Favorited if not only one i like from mlp

Im at my friends house, trying not to cry.. Trying not to cry.. Trying.. DAMNIT!! :fluttercry:

I have no words of how awesome and sad this story was... I am in happy tears, best story in my completed story section! :fluttercry: :pinkiesad2:

This story was....well, where even to start? It was sad, it was joyful, it was romantic, it was hopeful...it was realistic. And, above all, it was really, really good! :pinkiehappy:
Not only was the actual story good and a past I could really see as Derpy's, but it had the right message as well. I'd recommend the advice given in this story to anyone who needs to be picked up. I'm not sure if you've been in a similar situation or you are a truly understanding person, but wow it had incredible messages throughout the whole thing.
GAH. Tears, I don't like them. But at least they're happy ones! :twilightsheepish:
Thanks for the wonderful, uplifting story! :scootangel:

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You're quite welcome :pinkiehappy:

Do you think I should try for equestria daily? I've been considering it...

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Certainly no harm in trying! And personally I've seen worse stories on there so give it a shot, you never know :pinkiehappy:

"That's fine," he said happily. "I haven't gotten my daily dose of catastrophe yet. No time like the present though."

:pinkiegasp: Silver Lining just won "Best Pony Award." :pinkiehappy:

Yep, Silver is definitely best pony...human...hybrid thing. :applejackunsure: Yeah, that's a little weird...um, I'll just stick with best pony...if that's okay?

:fluttercry: I've been dreading this even before learning that Silver Lining had cancer. It's still sad, but it is a powerful and meaningful moment and truly showcasing all that I enjoyed about Silver's character and his relationship with Derpy. Good job...now if you'll excuse me for a moment...:raritycry:

:pinkiesad2: I think this emoticon just says it all.

I've read many stories on this site, but I don't think I've encountered one that has affected quite so much emotionally and mentally since Past Sins--and that story had me hooked on just what this site could offer. So here I am with another story about trials of life and overcoming hardships that can really be learned from and applied in my own personal life. I haven't suffered from depression--nor do I wish to or pretend to understand what it is like--but I think that we can all agree that everyone needs to have there own silver lining in their lives when things go wrong. Sometimes that silver lining may be you. :raritywink:

Thank you TeyesonthPegasus for such a great story. I'm sad to see that it has so few views, but it certainly is a treasure. :twilightsmile::heart:

5695151 You're welcome, you definitely deserve it. :ajsmug:

But it FELT so real. What if it was real? No, dreams can't be real...can they?

Couldn't help but think of this:
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This story is a masterpiece, it made my cry so hard too...

Comment posted by Teyeson Bee deleted Jul 16th, 2015

This is a really good start. Especially at the end where you leave us all hanging by saying, "And this is where the story begins." Yep! This's a good one. :twilightsmile:

AAARRRAAGG!!! The FEELS!
:fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair::applecry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch:

I cried so hard. So hard. In the middle of lunch. So hard.
This story....is a masterpiece. HOW?!? Are you not world famous?
Just wow. I can't even begin to describe it. Just wow.
Best sad story I will ever come across.

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I guess the idea's been so overdone, and there are probably some minor writing/grammar errors within the story. I don't claim to be a great writer, but I'm happy that those who do read my stories like them. Glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

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