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The Atlantean

I write all sorts of stories, but I tend towards military and crossovers. My Equestria Amino username is Random Twin, so if you recognize me from there, hi!



This story is a sequel to The Red Sun Rises: Siege of Manehattan

Equestria is at war with Sombra and the Crystal Empire. The foreigner Crimson Dawn, colonel of the Atlantean army, leads the Equestrian resistance at Manehattan. During a lull in the battle, Princess Luna is assassinated.

With help from USS Ronald Reagan and the remains of her escort fleet, Princess Celestia must traverse the perilous Celestial Sea to the ancient Dominion of Apollo. There, the scientists and magic researchers may have a solution to both Celestia's loss and Reagan's path to home.

I should mention that this takes place at the same time as the beginning of Homefront ( https://www.fimfiction.net/story/352606/the-red-sun-rises-homefront ).

If you don't feel like re-reading the first 3 chapters since they're in Siege of Manehattan, just skip to Chapter 4. I really just wanted to recap and start at the beginning of the chapters focused on Celestia because it made sense, because this part is her journey.

Warning: Navy technical terms and plenty of language will be common. If anyone doesn't completely understand a term, please tell me. As for the language, I am not responsible for your innocence being ruined by F-bombs. You chose to read this story, and Navy people drop a lot of curse words.

If I could get some feedback, that would be amazing.

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 5 )

Chapter name inspired by The Battle of Sugar Cane River Part 1, chapter 29 of Fireheart 1945's The War of 1002. Link to his excellent military fic is here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/50809/the-war-of-1002

Woah :rainbowdetermined2:

Thanks, man! :twilightsmile:

He was Christian, after all, and would only bow before his God


Not a bad story.

Sorry I took so long to get through it.

As writer myself, I can say your story look pretty good found a few typos but nothing big. I'm enjoying this story.

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