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Epsilon-Delta


I like things that are spooky or cute. Now with kofi.

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A compilation of four Halloween-themed one-shots.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

It has Derpy in the cover art therefore I'll read this.

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I'll point out that this is Dinky Hooves in the cover after you're done.:trixieshiftright:

But, uh! Dinky Hooves is like, genetically half of Derpy Hooves! Also the next chapter has Derpy in it! And, uh, she appears in the last story too.

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Thanks for reading! I hope that damn means I was successful with the twist.

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I'm running inverted colors here, so I saw flashlight, big, happy, adorable, smile, and crisis eyes. I was like "DERPY!". That'll be a nice chapter to read though.

meh...could be better

7610722 I saw the whole Dash part a mile away, that was REALLY cliche, but that twist at the end-damn, didn't see that coming!

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Well, that one was the actual twist.

7623790 Dash? If so, then come on, it was getting pretty obvious there at the end.

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No, I mean the last part was the actual twist, not the part about Dash.

Great story, it really came together when AJ and Twi found Derpy's head so freshly severed she was probably blinkin' and barely seemed affected. Though, I think there's one mistake around there:

“A rat?!” Twilight angrily jabbed her hoof at Big Mac's head.

Nice. Worthy of the twilight zone.

That was a really good series of stories. My favorite was the ghost one.

this is just too good

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yeah, its premise was so clever

“I knew you wanted more ponies to adore you,” said Pinkie. “So I went ahead and made more ponies super-devoted to you.”

How did she aim potion's effect on Rarity?

“Hey,” Dash said. “My name is Inquisitor Rainbow Dash, but you can just call me Dash. I'm here on an investigation. I hope none of you have a problem with that.”

Dashie shall fear nothing. For she is what you fear.

Those big vampire bats are what break my windows.

Hmm, why vampire pony is "vampony", but vampire bat isn't "vambat"?

The pony you least suspect of being a vampony, that's the one it always turns out to be.

Probably because when you find vampony you stop looking who else to suspect?

I'm one of the most honest and respect ponies in town

Respected?

She had dozens of them and from the sound of it could talk about any of them for ours.

For hours?

That sleeping back turned out to be nice and cozy.

Sleeping bag?

Dash cam right in front of Pinkie.

Well, I'd say how it (as I think) supposed to be, but it'll definitely sound wrong out of context.

“You see, you can't be the vampony,” said Dash, “if I am.”

Actually, she totally can.

“It's because you can't be a vampony,” Twilight said, growling out each word with significant effort, about to lose control to her blood lust, “if you're a werewolf!”

It's weird that they just allowed her to kill 3 (potentially 4) of them.

And in the end Fluttershy turns out kinda irrelevant.

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I hardly remember anything about this story and have half a mind to delete it TBH.

I love this!

“Well, either way it doesn't matter,” said Fluttershy, smiling just a little too wide. “All that matters is that you're all here now and can never leave and that I'll never, ever be alone again.”

Friendship is free like a butterfly. That you can put in a jar. Forever.

Fluttershy sat there shocked, mouth agape, heart beating hard, wondering what the buck just happened or why.

Not you alone, Fluttershy :rainbowlaugh:


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and have half a mind to delete it TBH.

Aww, but it's nice!

The only note I have is that the first chapter may need some kind of separate warning since for someone who saw Comedy tag and cute picture discussion of quadruple amputation and pony burning alive may be a bit too intense.

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Well I reread the paranormal investigation one at least. That one's fine... though I did need to fix about 200 mistakes. Yeesh.

This was a fun quartet of stories.

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