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yay I was starting to wonder if you hated Pinkie.
7530377 Dont worry I never did and I wanted to prove that by making this story you should read my other stories. I have some positive stories about Pinkie
Mm, very nice. I think you'll find a good majority of readers prefer to read sweet things like this.
I still think you could do with a bit of editing help (whistles inconspiciously) but this is much more enjoyable.Thanks for writing!
How many stories do you have lined up for publishing?! It's like my "chapter a day" frenzy I had, but with full-blown one-shots!
7530385 I work on this site constantly while I'm off of work. Just watch out I have a huge load coming after this first load. ;)
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I shudder in anticipation.
7530384 Your welcome. I wrote this story as a plea for an apology for those other stories I have written. I do notice that the majority here likes these types of stories. I might write another story involving tickling to so...
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Thanks a lot
7530382 Ill check em out sometime. And as a few people have said most people;e will probably like the lighter stuff better. I myself don't mind a dark story as long as its not to mean spirited.
7530422 Check out my story Surprise. It's an adorable story I wrote involving tickling and its with Pinkie and Twilight
7530428 Thanks a lot. Raspberries and hugs are the best
7530472 I know right!?
7530484
Check out my other lighthearted stories to 
7530543 Thanks :)
Cute
7530864 Thank you! I knew people would find it cute
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7532405 You don't like it?
7532760 just wondering
7532879 You read a story of Pinkie and Twilight hugging what's not to like?
7534565 Thank you
Im glad you like it. I do don't I? 
7535102 less dislike more "what the... why?"
7535191 You don't understand it?
7535305 What I don't understand is why one would make this to be honest. I'm not one for such things, more into those long, and I mean really long, stories with massive amounts of plot, plottwists and words. A friend recommended this to me, that's the only reason why I read this.
As for the possible adorableness / cuteness, I don't really have a sense for that kind of stuff. It simply leaves me untouched.
7535409 Well I just wanted to make a cute sweet story. If you aren't for that cute stuff don't read it. It's not for everyone. A lot of people love those long adventure stories on fimfiction. People like stories like these because it comforts readers after a long tough day or they like it because they love really cute adorable stories or fluff as its called
7537667 That's right
It's pretty awesome!
7561568 Thanks I'm glad you liked it
Actually, it's you're
7564632 Thanks for pointing that out I didn't see that
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If you're up to challenge, and do like Twinkie Pie/TwiPie, I've got one for you. A vampire story containing said ship. For and extra challenge, it could be a horror story. Just an idea.
7564672 Eh...I don't know what I'll write. It's a cool idea...I don't know. I've got lots of other ideas I want to jot down to...sorry
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It's alright, just pitching the idea
7564939 I'll keep it in mind though
This could definitely use a cleanup, I caught several minor errors here and there.
Still, this was an enjoyable piece of fluff. Nicely done.
7705611 I'm sorry about the errors. I'll fix them. I'm glad you enjoyed it
7706129 Sorry i didn't even know i made her like that. I'm glad you enjoyed it though :)
7706174 Great! :)
You have redeem yourself.
I guess
8125050 I wrote this story in 2016 so I haven't redeemed myself
8125343 It told me that you just made a new story! Ugh! I hate when things get delayed for a long time
8125507 Nah this story was from a while back. I wish there was a story that I made that was liked as much as this
D' awwwww
8413764 I'm glad you thought it was cute!
It should be fine without thems kisses. It really should. Don't mix romance with where it doesn't belong.
A few tickles, though
... Cuddling is fine, actually. Very cute.
There were errors, but I'm tired to report them right away
. Also no build-up... Mayn't have cuddles and just be so short 
.
You must master your finishing skills: bring the story to an end gracefully to leave a good impression.
That's all
!
9654961 I thought all of it was okay including the kissing. The kissing isnt supposed to be construed like that in this story. Were the tickles okay?
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In fact, had it not been for the tickles, I would have left... You see... One doesn't simply kiss the other. One kisses his mom, his grandma, maybe, even his teacher... Their male counterparts count as well, if the child is a girl, by the way. Manly friends might do that (but the kiss must be extremely manly itself as well, otherwise they mayn't!), and so might girly friends (but you know a kiss between two girly friends, when you see one). Of course possible spouses do that too, and their kisses aren't extremely manly or girly, nor are they the kisses one gives to his mother/father/grandmother/grandfather/someone elder (significantly!). There might as well be other types of kisses I may have missed.
Are Pinkie and Twilight a (grand)mother and a (grand)daughter? An innocent filly and an old lady? Are they two schoolgirls and besties?
Nope. And they aren't spouses (duh!).
They cuddle. That's strangely OK with me
... So be it. But there's no room for kissing.
The tickles made me stay... A tickling belly kiss I'll allow
: that was just a tickling device. Had it not been 
... Had it been an affectionate kiss... That'd have made them schoolgirl besties. You didn't portray them like that (and nor does the show). The implication is clear.
Don't make them kiss
. The way you made them it's honestly cringe-worthy (my AJ emojis won't lie 
). If it helps, though, cuddling was OK. I don't know, why I'm allowing that 
. Tickles are welcome as well 
...
Not the kissing
. (Am I enraged 
? I shouldn't be!)