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TheEvilCookie


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:duck: Where's Spikey?
:twilightsmile: having his ducts cleaned and a new pilot light instaled.

:moustache: That's me, The waddling heater.:twilightblush::raritywink:

there are a lot of grammarical errors over specifycations, as well as under secifycations. The whole thing felt rushed as well, especially towards the end. The text can be so confusing that I don't know what to make of it:

Twilight asked Rarity agreed and had Twilight answer her house.

You should look for someone to pre-read your story and correct your sentencing & spelling.

7576536 I'm sorry I was to busy I forgot to add Spike in XD

7576826 It's like that because I was impatient to get it done. I was so focused on getting to the 1,000 word limit that I forgot to check the errors.

7577005 :pinkiehappy: cuddles

:moustache: lucky I'm not an air conditioner & put away for winter wrap up:facehoof:

7577013 :rainbowlaugh:poor Spike I hope you liked it :)

7577006 don't worry about that, just write what you want, letting a word limit effect your story will only inhibit your abilities.

7577083 Your right. I should focus on the content not the word limit

I couldn't sleep last night

7577093 Me niether for some reason. :/ What a wierd coincidence" I couldent sleep and I wrote this! :rainbowlaugh:

7577041 yes I did thank you:pinkiegasp:

7577161 I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

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